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IJL
dude take my sig out of yours...
your were only supposed to rep the crew name LMAO..
those are my alias's son
uh, which way did he go? which way did he gooo?
Werd, Jynx... LMAO!!! You couldn't just PM with that BS. (LOL)
Alright.... Here it is....
ima sever ya spine, bitch!, im clever wit mines
unless i "autograph ya face" you wont ever get "signed"
Your mental pencil is broke,Verse is weak,I got ya head In my scope
Cuz The only way you "On Point" Is If i stuck A "Pen Thru Ya Throat"
ill freighten ya bitch ass, got you fleeing like race cars
ya whole verse like "san francisco" .. all im seeing is "gay bars"
its true i made you grow, but now ill have to slay you ho
cuz battlin me is "meaningless".. jus like the name you chose
homie ya ryhmes is lunch when i munch it, catch slugs from my pump prick
ima just put my 'fist threw ya heart' kuz i know you in love with my punchs..
ok... you can start voting when he drops...
This cat’s annoying, I leave him poisoned when he tries me
Came looking for a hook-up, sent him to doctors for the IV
Vocabz’s stricken when I rip scripts he’s written
He’s missing punches like I just split the diction
N’ spit with precision, this dullards offends with a simple life
When he works the crowd he bores em like a parasite
Seen this queer on the dome, watched him shunned by the throngs
Its not that I can’t bear seeing his shit, it’s just I’m no peeping tom.
Rocking gay punches and gimmicks, his boy came and jinxed him
But we give animosity the same colors…cept when I do im just pissin
IJL
wheres all the votes at? UPPIN!!!
Upppppinnnnnnn
ima sever ya spine, bitch!, im clever wit mines
unless i "autograph ya face" you wont ever get "signed"
^not bad, decent opener, great flow wit the 3 multies, made the punch hti harder
Your mental pencil is broke,Verse is weak,I got ya head In my scope
Cuz The only way you "On Point" Is If i stuck A "Pen Thru Ya Throat"
^wasn't feelin this one so much but flow was there
ill freighten ya bitch ass, got you fleeing like race cars
ya whole verse like "san francisco" .. all im seeing is "gay bars"
^this shit made me laugh...
its true i made you grow, but now ill have to slay you ho
cuz battlin me is "meaningless".. jus like the name you chose
^again with the 3 multies for flow, the personal was kinda weak but funny
homie ya ryhmes is lunch when i munch it, catch slugs from my pump prick
ima just put my 'fist threw ya heart' kuz i know you in love with my punchs
^this was a good finisher, liked it, hit decent
vs.
This cat’s annoying, I leave him poisoned when he tries me
Came looking for a hook-up, sent him to doctors for the IV
^nah... i see where u were goin but it didn't hit
Vocabz’s stricken when I rip scripts he’s written
He’s missing punches like I just split the diction
^lol's
N’ spit with precision, this dullards offends with a simple life
When he works the crowd he bores em like a parasite
^good punch... first line was madd dull tho
Seen this queer on the dome, watched him shunned by the throngs
Its not that I can’t bear seeing his shit, it’s just I’m no peeping tom.
^nah, and it barely rhymed
Rocking gay punches and gimmicks, his boy came and jinxed him
But we give animosity the same colors…cept when I do im just pissin
^this didn't rhyme but it was a good personal punch
VOTE - Vocabz
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v/ vocabz.
gotta give it to vocabz for having the nicer punches.
both came pretty hard, but i felt dangermanship wasn't as consistent.
good battle. no hate.
i appreciate the votes.... UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!
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vocabz
You had some pretty funny shit. Your structure was kind of all over the place, but the content of the verse was some lol-type shit. Decent.
4/10
Dangermanship
I couldn't find a single bar that I liked. All of your lines were just statements, simple statements. Nothing really dissed him. Go peep some LLL battles, work on your concepts.
1.5/10
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VOTE: vocabz
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I'll poll when you vote on my battle
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i really appreciate the vote, man. i dont worry too much about my structure, though. i mean, i just make sure its not stretched, ya know, lol. but yeah, if its topical, thats when i worry about my structure more, ya know... other than that, i just make sure my two bars pretty much line up, so the punches connect..... but thanks, yo.
UPPPINNNNNNN!!!!!
cool battle vocabz
uppin for some explained votes....
IJL
last UPPIN.... we need some more votes here, please....
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