MAKAVELII(needs to learn to get wit the challange) vs ying

[$ilk]

Aight ew are re-doing this because bitch was haveing a fit.

Rulz:
10-15 lines
No crew, d/r, hate votes
U spit first
24 hours to reply


Now that I did tihs shit you better respond in the 24 hour time limit or your screwed.

[UNDERATED~OVERHATED]

really dawg aite then .didnt u already spit put that shit up..your the bitch havin a fit over a no show ..when u just set that shit up mayne..so your to pussy to flow first ok...

[UNDERATED~OVERHATED]

here ya go homie..post your shit already..u already have one for me rite..

Holy shit ya games near to defeat reppin no show votes/
fuked wit me now your deceast last name ying u must be fresh of dem boats/
my rhymes meet ya ear drums so pull out that pen an pad/
start writin hear it comes homie these other cats just as bad/
im lyrical versityle switchin my style u steppin to a mad man/
madly seekin for money fame power an respect/
bitch i no u next u aint got nogame bout to be slapped wit my teck
i created a hit list an ya names first to be crossed out/
ya flows gettin tossed out splitten ya wig u just got knocked out/
lyin on my bloc bloody wit a fuked up face kid/
my verses are payments ill plaster your ass to the pavement/
so save it ya spits aint close to average my games savage/
ill erase this problem an cash in causin mad havec/
your werent ready for me so i advise u to bounce/
im steady spitten out flows till my teeth fall out/

[$ilk]

Man, in the open call I set rules, you wanted to do it, so follow the rules, go first. We are starting over again, got that, no nfair advantages, no hatin either, it was my mistake.

[UNDERATED~OVERHATED]

YEA I POSTED MAYNE.. JUST SPIT SUMTHIN SO I CAN GET ANOTHER BATTLE..I DOUBT U GOIN TO WIN.UNLESS THERES DIK RIDERS INTHIS SITE..WHICH I HAVENT SEEN..NO CREW VOTES..HOWMANY VOTES TILL U WIN 5..SPIT SUMTHIN

[$ilk]

Fuck this fuck that, can't you write a rhyme without swear words comeing out of your ass//
Why are you trying to outsmart me with that little vocabulary, that shit's out og my lyrical class//
My ryhmes are stone and you punches are just like glass, ill smash through them while takeing a judo stick to your ass//
Don't try to intimidate with those words, trying to incriminate me makes it even worse//
I bet I could get a monkey smarter thne you to write over your verse//
Money, fame, power, respect, those are things you shouldent be thinking about right now//
Cuz Im right here running you raggid with a busted ass snow plow//
I bet your getting tiered of reading this by now, arnt you//
Would you like it better if I stopped, went to your house, opended you mouth and took a poo//
Oh and by the way, if your teeth feel out you couldent rhyme//
Wait a minute, you couldent rhyme in the first place, what am I talking about, your rhymes are just easy as minute-made-lemon-lime//
Basic shit is the way you might be going, trying to go that why might get your jollies goin//
Beleive my lyrics will shower over you just like the mississippi, flowin//
Next time you want to step up to an actual pro, remember they like to take their time with slow ass hoe's//
So remember, next time you want to actually battle, make you sure you don't appear to be yourself, a no show//

[$ilk]

Aight chill out Elton John, I jsut spit, so lets get some votes in here.

Uppin
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[UNDERATED~OVERHATED]

WTF ELTON JOHN..WOW YOUR A FAG.

UPPIN FOR SUM VOTES..SO THIS BITCH HAS A LOSSIN RECORD.
UPPIN.REAL VOTES READ BOTH.. CUZ I NO IF U NO THE RAP GAME U NO WHO TO VOTE FOR.HONESTLY YING YA SHIT WAS ABUNCH OF JIBER JABER..BUT WELL SEE.
UPPIN

[Derive]

yo my vote goes to ying, he had better punches nice flo and a better mettie, oh and can yall go vote on my battle at

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...986#post551986

since i voted on this battle

iight thx
holla,

-Purple Haze

[$ilk]

Hmmm... seems to me that someone is jealous, besides right now you are just saying, "vote for me I am better". You a fucken big headed bitch.

Yeah 5 losses, 5 wins, yep, at least I have a record. Besides why don't you battle G UNIT like I did, or K-Crazy, the good people, man your the pussy.

[UNDERATED~OVERHATED]

ANy one want to vote on a decent battle...UPPIN
WE NEED SUM VOTES IN THIS BIZNATCH
UPPIN..COME ON PEEP..WHERE DEM VOTES AT.I JUST GOT ON THIS SITE A FEW DAYS AGO THATS WHY..SO STOP BITCHIN
UPPIN FOR SUMVOTES

[$ilk]

Well then don't make fun of my record, so please just stop hatin, learn to realy appreciate the people who you battle, instead of just dissing on tme, unless they actually bitchin on you, lucky for you Im patient with dumbasses.

[UNDERATED~OVERHATED]

THERE YA GO HOMIE U KEEP TALKIN SHIT SHUTTHE FUK UP.. AN LET PEEPS VOTES MAYNE.. I DOUBT THEY EVEN THIS IS A BATTLE NOW..DAMN STOP BITCHIN MAYNE..HERES MY VERSE TO THOSE PEEPS WHO DONT NO FROM ALL THIS FREE POSTIN THIS CAT DOES.

Holy shit ya games near to defeat reppin no show votes/
fuked wit me now your deceast last name ying u must be fresh of dem boats/
my rhymes meet ya ear drums so pull out that pen an pad/
start writin hear it comes homie these other cats just as bad/
im lyrical versityle switchin my style u steppin to a mad man/
madly seekin for money fame power an respect/
bitch i no u next u aint got nogame bout to be slapped wit my teck
i created a hit list an ya names first to be crossed out/
ya flows gettin tossed out splitten ya wig u just got knocked out/
lyin on my bloc bloody wit a fuked up face kid/
my verses are payments ill plaster your ass to the pavement/
so save it ya spits aint close to average my games savage/
ill erase this problem an cash in causin mad havec/
your werent ready for me so i advise u to bounce/
im steady spitten out flows till my teeth fall out/

[Ace Of Spades]

this is a close one
Yings verse was a long one
tryin to defend himself which
doesn't really count as punches
so im gonna have to give this one
to makavel because not only did
he come hard for a newbie but he
had a couple of good multies, this
is a pretty close battle and ying
when u battle don't defend urself
because a lot a people hate feeders, trust
me, i tried that before
vote=Makavel 2
Peace

[Jet]

both were bad....makavelli's was worse...made no sense.....
ying..contradicts himself right off the bat...i dun get it...
both of ya gotta elevate...no hate..i give this vote to ying...
slightly betta sense an maybe a lil harder punches....
ELEVATE....