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Thread: Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

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    Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

    Italics - Slick Progrezz (Murderer)
    Bold - Cyanidal. (Victims family)

    Murder.

    Razorblades circulate in the ways of my brain
    They cause pain cutting up thoughts and veins
    Blood clogs my pores, state of mind:.....of cause insane
    Closed doors restrain my sanity to create
    Haters in my house and enemies at the gate
    Too late another gay slayed, set the record straight
    I hate hate but it gets me brave, it has me slaved
    The ice inside my chest lessens pace,


    as the sun sets a mother wails her blues to the world
    "she was supposed to be back at 7 it's 10 now"
    as tears scatter her nightgown, her face as pale as pearl
    her husband slumps in to comfort her, uninspired upon her frown
    ......by the thought that his wifes theory may prove to be true
    malicious images cackle their ghostly laughter around the room

    "She'll be back Soon, Don't worry she shall be fine"
    he tries to sooth her depression as she stutters to talk
    "but what if she is'nt, ARE WE JUST GONNA SIT TIGHT!"
    Her face regaining colour now, she stops and waits for the sirens call

    somewhere in this corrupt city a life has been taken
    rainy skies shown through windows, washing the unclean hands
    of the villain who hast' spilt the blood of the innocent, forsaken
    thee shalt' not boast this tale nor' let it travel to burden innocent glands


    my breath impales my lungs right pocket.....the left it fails
    the gat I might cock it, what’s left is nails
    in the coffin, worms and snails on the rotten
    my thoughtz in chains and I’m stoppin’
    running the knife in flesh not for a second
    I feel a slight regret, this kid might be dead
    But I’m not thinkin bout droppin the knife in trash......a flash.....
    I see a lightning crash before my eyes
    Nothin worth livin...y’all might as well ignore my life....



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    Re: Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

    slept on as always....tzzz

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    Re: Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

    this is a pretty cool piece actually, kinda sad but good. The two styles don't quite mesh to me, idk, but both of you had good vocabulary and structure. The flow was on point the entire time and the piece kept my attention. I liked the different rhyme schemes too. Good job on this one

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    Re: Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

    thx for the feed...much appreciated

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    Re: Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

    up...

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    Re: Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

    This was a dope piece, yo. Im sorry, for not hitting it up sooner. Lately, I been up to alot. This had incredible vocab. And the structure, unbelievable. The flow was definitely on point here. Keep dropping the hotness... RTD...

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    Re: Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

    thx for the feed yo....stay up watch the ProgrezZ

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    Re: Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

    wake up u stupid ignorant fagz

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