Pool A Finals: Atticus vs. Nique

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NEW YEAR KICK-OFF

POOL-A FINALS

Atticus vs. Nique

Verses due Sunday February 25th, 2007
Winner is Golden Script Champion.

[Nique.]

Cool stuff.

[Atti]

check.

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topics will be up by sunday - and dates will be changed.
i'm on holidays so if someone (witness maybe) wants to
make a topics thread i'll sticky it on my return! sorry guys.

[Nique.]

The Road Never Used

Delante Johnson
Los Angeles California

It’s tougher to say..
How I would suffer the praise,
Of a color engraved; This covenant plagued
My black brothers who slaved, on the corners
Going undiscovered and slain.

I remember when..

I was flushed from within..
Broken nose, black eyes, dried blood on my chin.
Aching muscles and bruises; I was itching to cure..
I couldn’t see, it’s hard to breathe from the kicking endured.
The crowd of men back off; A scary evening..
Ends with a blur of shadows and heavy breathing.
I get up wearily and stand on my own..
Now there’s no way out, and my plan was unknown.

A foggy night..

The hood covers my eyes..
Passenger seat, low rider, glock tucked on my side.
My colors bleed brotherhood; The next second, I dread..
Easing on the gas pedal, I wipe the sweat from my head.
Hittin` up one of their spots; No grievance was shown..
The biggest mistake these two made, was being alone.
We pull up, I pull out– Directed and aimed..
The bullets creating art; Perfecting their frame..
They collapse like propped dummies; Behind the door..
Watching as their chest spilled what I’ll be dying for.
A mere color; Those minutes felt like hours have passed..
We speed off; Thinking we have the power at last.

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See I was a coward, in fact; Heavily sporting the blame
Because I didn’t have an option..I was born in a gang
Generations of hatred; I’d rather plummet in silence
Cause` my pride wouldn’t ever let me stomach the violence
No educational settings; Dealt with the foolishness, able..
To do anything as long as I put food on the table
I was trapped in this life; My friends, the ignorance killed them
The karma came back fast from the innocent victims
Paranoia sets in...hoping I’d live when I’m older,
Never too comfortable when I have a chip on my shoulder
I need help...but too scared, and my shamefulness leaks
Passing ripped posters saying “END GANGS”on the street
I should’ve spoke up...but my entire appearance was antsy
To get out...but more than my life, I was fearing my family

Later that night..

Stepping out for a quick bite...couldn’t hope for more
The hunger pains sends me to a local store
I was skeptical...nothing awkward would often erupt
But my lack of thought made me not cautious enough
Deli sub in one hand...my heart was softened, relaxed
Pushing the door to leave, but never ever watching my back
Never seeing them both...suddenly swarmed and attacked
What goes around, comes around..and the karma’s intact
I was haunted and trapped; Forced to swallow the threats
Gun shots going off, four shots to the chest..
I was dead; I tried to fight, but the innocence indeed
Died a long time ago, when the ignorance killed me

The Road Never Used..

Was the road to get out.

-Nique.

[Atti]

Rebecca's red head rushed under the rough water..
.. and brushed the ledge once;
before, she could get a breath up-
floods smothered her lungs in one rush of a daughter!
the suns' lost her again,
her head jumps from water,
to rock, to ledge- her friends begin to think she's dead from
the water logged coughs, and sound of question.multiple concussions.
The kids all

.. sorry guys, I'm just done *shrug*

[Maven.]

v/nique. for actually trying.

[Witty]

yea vote Nique, Atticus came with basically nothing, Nique had a very nice read.

[P. Mortuus]

vote Nique for having a piece.

[Nique.]

meh@ no showing a championship match.

[Leonidas]

Nique, i liked your words and the way you expressed everything. Good job with your drop.

...But vote Nique for trying.

[Heychoo.]

nique. idk if atti could have beat her if he had dropped anyway, though.

[Blackflags]

^ I Disagree.......Atti Is a very talented individual, although Nique is aswell, I think Atti would have taken this in the end......But vote- Nique!

[Engivale]

ugh... that was nonclimactic. Do I even have to say what I'm voting for? Is this even a vote? Atticus conceded. Great way to end the season. Shit, at least SS will get going again soon.

[Truth Iscariot]

o well i ain't know atti was gonna do that vote nique

nique you still had a beastly ass verse