evil king(WR) vs Reli_Mak(NA)

[evil king]

Crew Battle
Well rounded vs NA

10-18 lines
Blind spit
due saturday midnight 12pm
Good L

[Relli_Mak]

A Triple Check...

[Relli_Mak]

ya write ya verses for battles?

Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passion
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins

do you pre-write your verse before you battle someone

Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurt
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work

I know but I rather drop something off the head then a written cause there's alout of biters on site's like this

Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight this
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous

True fuck it I'ma start pre-writing then and see the diifernce within my verses

Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say so
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio

**Let the Massacre Begin...**

U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded

18

[evil king]

If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
.
.
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 da nextlevel he neva made da crew.
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
downloadin animalplanet only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.

blah nothing too creative juss enough to win.........I think lol

don't get don't vote

[evil king]

uppin 1.

[Relli_Mak]

Upp 1

[evil king]

uppin 1

[evil king]

uppin.

[one way]

don't get don't vote

no......... if we dont get it thats your fault.

and you said that I needed more punches, you dont know what a punchline is, and quit with the poser gangsta lines there gay.

other guy had a better go, lines were more hitting and no selling coke talk like it cool stuff or something.


vote.........mak

Vote DQed...wack

-Smoka

[Ghost Face]

Breakdown...


Evil...

If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
pretty dope wordplay...liked it...
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
Lol, not bad
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 the next level he neva made da crew.
LOL! Nice punch!
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
meh...kinda played...
downloadin animalplanet prolly only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
lol, pretty creative...
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
no...just no...
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
Lol...shoulda made it Kane...for people who don't know...
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
Seen that done before...weak closer too...

Overall...7/10...Started strong with some good punch's. But, it seemed like at the end you were just reachin' wit some of the shit. Like you didn't have the endurance for that many lines...


Reli_mak


Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passion
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins
Meh...self glory...and it sucked...
Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurt
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work
lol, not a bad concept
Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight this
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous
...no...no...no...no...that was whack...
Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say so
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio
eh...not too sure about this one...
U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
kinda a good punch...mediocre at best...
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
Hour glasses take forever...and salt is too big...they use sand...NOT an accurate punch...
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
shoulda been..."even Sherlock Holmes COULDN'T find your verse..." Weak anyways...
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
???????WTF??????
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
Whack, WHACK closer...

Overall...3/10...Dude...you had maybe 1 good line outa like 18...thats pretty sad...You didn't have ANY fresh concept...no good wordplay...no metaphor's...it was FL trash material...I thought for a crew leader you should have some skil...NO hate at all...Very disappointed in your drop...hope to see better from you...


V/ Evil...Above reasons...

[Relli_Mak]

^^Ghost, I would consider that vote as a hate one, but I'm not a complainer...(I do have links)...however, that was already anticipated w/ u because u and E.K. are cool...just hating and dick riding goin on I C...

[Lyrical_Maniac]

(Creative verse)

Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passion
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins
(aight)
Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurt
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work
(nice)
Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight this
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous
(lol..good)
Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say so
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio
(aight)

**Let the Massacre Begin...**

U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
(lol, damn)
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
(aight, needed betta wording tho')
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
(decent)
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
(different, but I liked it)
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
(could've had a betta closer)


Vs.


If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
(needed betta wording)
.
.
(u needed something there)
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
(aight)
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 da nextlevel he neva made da crew.
(Seen where u were going, but nah)
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
(meh)
downloadin animalplanet only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
(aight)
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
(??)
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
(drug lines..? Nah)
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
(could've had a betta closer)

To me, Mak got this one. His flow was original and direct, and Evil you had some ok lines, but your flow was all over and not centered in on the battle...v/ Mak

[.:~Digital~:.]

Relli
Yea..cuz writing tight flows for me is such a ultimate passion
Evil gay ass tryn 2 b a nurse, cuz he's a R.ival of N.efarious A.ssassins
Not feelin this man -- not really that good
Typically, yes...sumtimes I quik-key 2 give my opp.'s less hurt
Cuz if I didn't pre-write, it'd be wack..just like ur best work
Decent
Do wut u must, but this is a loss for you, so don't fight this
Ur so pathetic, u make otha corrupt royalty wanna go righteous
no nothin special bout this
Congrats, but it won't help u much, retreat if I must say so
The outcome of this, me vs. you, I predict a quik 5:0 ratio
Somethin a newb would say sorry

U said 2 join ur crew, dat ppl need 3 battle wins per week
Y is dat, dats sumthin u not even capable 2 complete
lol nce
U reek w/ stink flows, it's not cuz u always shower last
Ur rap career only lasted seconds.............................
................I see it falling fast like salt in an hour-glass
NO!!! wtf
U just known 2 curse, but its real lyrics that I disperse
Think u hav a 'clue' bout rappin, cuz........................
..........................Sherlock Holmes found you a verse
um nope not hittin
Ur punches are lower-'hits', and mines are upper-'cuts'
U get ate easily, hav a harder time eatn when my supper sucks
wut the hell -- this was directed towards yourself haha
Ur flows needs a little Maintenance, n they not Well Rounded
Evil King decided 2 go up to heaven, cuz...........................
...............he got scared at how going down to Hell Sounded
Um weak closer wow

Dude work on ya punches make them more direct dont just throw words that rhyme together i aint hatin just givin ya tips on elevatin -- use betta personals and punches and try to be more creative you started out good and then you lagged at the end so try and stay consistant as well

vs

Evil
If I had two word's to describe him I wouldn't quote shit.
him spit crack? ha................................................ ..
closest he's got 2 that is the aftertaste after he smoke's it.
meh - kinda played and coulda worded better
your crew, fuckin sucks N' I don't think I've seen NA worse.
ur suppose to save the best 4 last....................................
.................so now do you understand why I chose NA first?
haha nce wordplay
you don't realize I'm winnin guess I gotta phade it threw.
cuz last time he made it 2 da nextlevel he neva made da crew.
meh - decent
if this battle was a game of tug of war u won't be pullin it.
buncha newb's, his crew threadz like a sewer..full of shit.
meh - kinda played
downloadin animalplanet only time u manage a vet crew.
N' I always thought pussy didn't have a face.................
.....................................well thats until I fucking met you.
haha nce
damn herb couldn't baby a win even if he was damn weezy.
and I would've added you to my roster but mak's jam easy.
meh -decent
would describe a good pussy but I don't wanna mess wit his fixture.
hustla?ha last time he push cane he was downlaodin wrestlin pictures.
haha funny but not an actual punch
shitted on him wit nothing 2 good so now he's gotta be piss.
and how can u be a underrated mc?.......................
..........when you've always been at the bottom of the list.
Oh damn!! Nce finisher

You could play with your words a lil more and throw harder hitting punches but good verse and drop

My vote goes to Evil for overall better verse no hate to Relli but you still need room for elevating Evil was more consistant throughout his whole verse attempted and landed more punches than Relli as well for this reason my vote goes to Evil

[Matix]

this battle was fuckin confusing as fuck. U both tried way too hard, an it just sounded confusing. Use more wordplay, metas, instead of plainly stating facts about each other and not really gettin too creative wid the punches. They were boring too read. That shit was bland. Rappin bout Sherlock Holmes is wack. Reli had a weak finisher, no sting. too wordy. Evil King came harder wid the punches. His shit was more hardcore in my opinion. HIs punches had more sting. He had a better finisher. Vote: Evil King

[Ghost Face]

^^Ghost, I would consider that vote as a hate one, but I'm not a complainer...(I do have links)...however, that was already anticipated w/ u because u and E.K. are cool...just hating and dick riding goin on I C...

Lol, grab the links son. I left details of what i thought. Just cause i'm tryin to get in the crew don't mean imma hate vote...Just cause i make fun of you and NA don't mean it's a hate vote...It's cool...get smoka to delete it if you think i'm being unfair here...