http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=655336
me(unseen prophetic visionary)
produced by SS...
and most beats made by archaic....
all 12 songs are heat....
theres no hate in this thred i have moved to a new level so you can like the songs and leave feedback or you can kill yourself cuz this is the next phaze of hip hop...the bands name is GOD or Go Out and Distroy...all songs are metaphoricle parables about religion in hopes to open your minds
uppen
ok so you made 12 tracks and you want me to listen to all of them and feed on them? okay thats to much man....I'll listen to one and tell you what i think. ANd P.S. how was my lyrics bad? I packed punchlines in the verses and multiples throughout. Unless you not feelin what I'm sayin with my words.
Anyway for your feed....
Listen to "Welcome To God" okay voice is kinda young soundin...Your delivery is very low and ya flow is off here and there. You seem really uncomfortable with the mic duke. Ya lyrics are okay i'm not focused on them cause i can't understand them when ya flow is everywhere. Ya vocals need to be turned up a bit as well man...the beat is boring to me needs somin in it. Ya quality is also kinda weak, it's not too bad but it's coo duke. no hate at all man just being honest with ya....overall decent job would like to see you deliver and practice ya lyrics a little more before you record.
thanks for the feed back ill except any feedback i can get...uppen on some more
oh and no hate on lyrics coment i didnt feel your delivery which made the lyrics sound off to me but to each there own and no hate....honestly ill go back and listen again cuz i cant remember any lines of your song as an example of why i didnt feel it...ill send you a message or something....
uppen
Last edited by Xdicy; January 28th, 2007 at 10:23 PM
wow stop being a bunch of sleeping ass mother fuckers....
uppen
this CD aint a pillow so stop sleeping on it!!!
imma critique track 6 , if im feelin it ill DL it ,
beat im not really feelin , just not my steez ,
flow was ok sounded more like spoken word on a beat ,
not bad def a diff vibe to it . Ill check a few more .
-Kamikaze Lyricist
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that wasnt me in track six i was puttin on my home boy....but thanks for the feed back
uppen
wut 1's ya fave? i'll feed that one.
I.J.L Reppin
Tatt And Blue Perhaps You Knew
wow thats a hard question...probably my dreams are all dead and burried or.....god is dead is phat i think evil as hell sounding...thank you religion is realy inteligent...the beat in almighty spoken word is insainly awesome....and the lyrics and in almighty warpig although alittle in your face i like alot....any one of those...idk just pick one...the only one that is a skit is the little city song...thanks for asking though....uppen
wow! how did my feedback get deleted thats bullshit
uppen sence somehow my other feed got deleted
i listened to a couple...i think with the delivery or w/e, it sounds more like you're just stating your lyrics instead of feeling them, i still have problems with that myself....on the dreams dead n buried one, i think u might be trying to squish to much in one line which is messing ur flow... the main thing tho is getting into your lyrics, like para said, pracitce them and feel them, instead of just saying them...that's pretty much it, lyrics r str8, maybe vocals up on track 1 likepara said, otherwise, it was good stuff...
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thanks...you made my day...this CD was recorded so fast i realy didnt memorize all my lyrics like i usualy do and i no the vocals need to be mixed better...so thanks for the feed main...
uppen
dude i love this fuckin CD
u really should take ur time when makin a cd, even if u aint gon push it, u want ppl 2 feel it so they will becomes n possibly cop a cd in tha futureOriginally Posted by Xdicy
take ur time when u do shit, it turns out better
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yo i realize that but it was such drive i took most time writing with this cuz its a wordy CD... i tried to change lives in this CD not move bodies which is different then not only my own CD's befor this but most shit out at all right now... so what if in 1 or two songs my delivery sounds off...unless there trying not to hear the lyrics they will and hopefully they'll see this CD is more then hiphop...atleast thats how i feel about it...i learned shit writing this CD and researching for this CD...fuck i find shit in my lyrics that touches me in ways i didnt even mean to do...but none the less i hope people take it for what it is;the first addition to an assortment of CD's that will change and save those who allow it too...
uppen
(sorry for spelling errors)
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