coo..gettin some votes...bump
mad dogg
yung ghost
coo..gettin some votes...bump
uppin
Vote!!
your a poodle......and ima fuckin rotweiler
i got this "dog" on lock....like i controled his shock collar
^^^lol dont know if you could make it rhyme but good concept
so chalk up this L...cuzz you just got beat
he got caught strayin from the pack...then got lyrically put 2 sleep
^^^worded wierd but ok closer
basically basic flow structure, one or two punches not hard though, decent drop keep on elevating you got promise 7/10
ima ghost busta//you the ghost ima fuck
you up like a fake hustla//bitch you think yo got this inna bag//
^^^does that even rhyme or make sense
thats all imma repost cuz its all the same, first off nooooooooooooo
dont ever rap like that EVER cuz it sux no offense but you need a lot of help wordplay, multies, punches, structure, stretched lines just everything
2/10
v/ yung
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uppin this shit...help me out..need 1 vote to close
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=324200
Me vs some noob. It's 3-0
Please...
No need to break this down AT ALL.
Yung came weak. Or maybe I'm just used to good battlers. IDK. It doesn't matter. After looking at his opponent's verse, I really didn't even need to read it to know who won... but I did, to be fair.
Dogg, your verse was HORRIBLY worded, try to restructure it so it is easier to read, which is one of the most important aspects in a TEXT battle. Work on punches, wording, concepts... blah, blah, blah.
Yung, come harder.
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