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Thread: ********nEvER SLEEp on ME***********

  1. February 1st, 2007, 11:57 AM #1
    WhitE kONg
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    ********nEvER SLEEp on ME***********

    when you gone come at me...you best to come cor-rect!!!
    cuz otherwise ill grab ya throat...and start to bend your neck!!!
    muhfuckers know that i dont play...when it comes to battle rapping!!!
    pop two shots in ya frontal lobe...have ya asking what just happened???
    they call me the WhiTE kOnG...cuz dude imma Pale Guerilla...
    my "Shots always Succeed"...no my bullets wont "Fail to Fill ya"!!!
    N.A. STAND UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    me and my crew will eat you up...then we'll spit you out...
    Punchlines hurt you physically...my words'll hit ya mouth!!!
    what kinda shit you bout...cuz thats some wierd stuff...
    you know when WhiTe KoNG rolls thru...that dudes geared up!!!
    this was just an open mic...but i could use it to rip dude...
    who is dude...i dont know...but i wont say cuz its rude...
    dawg ive been a member...and no i dont got the jacket...
    when you see that brass ring...dawg you know you gotta grab it!!!
    if you dont you not gone hack it...in this muhfucking game...
    where do my spits come from...dont know somewhere in the back of my brain!!!
    ALL OTHER CREWS FALL BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    dude you dont want to fuck wit us...cuz fucking wit us will get you fucked wit...
    put this duct tape over ya grill...get ya mouth shut up quick!!!
    nevermind what you be thinking...cuz man we dont got time...
    WhiTE kONG keeps saying he's wak...man why wont he stop lying!!!
    cuz you and me we both know he's sic...quick get ya spit...
    cuz he's coming thru to take all ya shit!!!

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  2. February 1st, 2007, 12:30 PM #2
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    Re: ********nEvER SLEEp on ME***********

    truthfully i was not feeling your brag rap ..
    i once did something like that but only mine inlcuded
    metaphors ,and i layed it down w/ multies ..
    cuz the thing when it comes to this , is well its played
    and now a days no ones is interested in plain old brag rights.
    so you either have to up it w/ good multie's , Rhyme scheme,
    metaphors.... and so on..

    stay up , thats the only place you can go!
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  3. February 1st, 2007, 01:21 PM #3
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    Re: ********nEvER SLEEp on ME***********

    Feedback people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. February 1st, 2007, 09:51 PM #4
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    Re: ********nEvER SLEEp on ME***********

    Ok for the bragadocious shit, the punchlines weren't shockin, pretty played concepts, the shcemes were basic two an some times 3 syllable,nothin special. THe flow was great though, even an not too stretched out. That's really the only positivie i get this shit though, metaphors weren't complex either. Just keep writin. 6.5/10
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  5. February 2nd, 2007, 02:03 AM #5
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    Re: ********nEvER SLEEp on ME***********

    bump

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