Agony's Vengence

[Axeshun]

Enhance deep passion rolling on cement virtues the facial cracks
Prance creeps, assasins holding in contemt curfews and racial acts
Where they were slaves, in fact I'll actually like to take you back to
To the time African tribes struggled for freedom held in pagan shackles
Only god knows how many how many children where whipped they wept
At the same moment of being raped in the same cabin in which they slept
Now as I take you back to reality where the pain is equal to love
With a prayer being delivered by a large flock of seagulls and doves
Birds of two feathers over powers whomever, until their bones show
With co-operation cold consulations only speaking of what I don't know
Visualize a prison of guys killing each individual inside, felling suprised?
Willing to die for those saving a building with over a million children inside
A double helix represents my history I don't need a book to listen to
Symbolic remarks I'm writing in the dark with visions so Hieroglyphical
The pictures falsh full course collision forge my vision, a dead smile
Land slide destroy my home in the gorgeous day I live in exile
You've never witnessed seeing guns fired, innocent individuals shot
Ripping and penetrating flesh that reseembles synicale, though its not
Now this shit is getting out of hand torture, in all sesmical spots
I'd try physicaly but it feels as if I have no hands like digital clocks
Rogue in vogue control my whole globe so really I don't know, though
I can uphold my own so don't for one second think I wont explode
Before you die I'll kick your whole body off of about eleven cliffs
Put you in your coffin and roll it off the top of Mount Everest
It's sick in life stab the belly of the beast then twist the knife
The most valuable thing to him is nothing more than his life
He has nothing left wife murdered along with his family of ten kids
Now the biggest pain is toturing the individual and letting him live


"My face it inmprinted in the ground"

[MadLyrics]

Enhance deep passion rolling on cement virtues the facial cracks
Prance creeps, assasins holding in contemt curfews and racial acts
Where they were slaves, in fact I'll actually like to take you back to
To the time African tribes struggled for freedom held in pagan shackles
Only god knows how many how many children where whipped they wept
At the same moment of being raped in the same cabin in which they slept
Now as I take you back to reality where the pain is equal to love
With a prayer being delivered by a large flock of seagulls and doves
Birds of two feathers over powers whomever, until their bones show
With co-operation cold consulations only speaking of what I don't know
Visualize a prison of guys killing each individual inside, felling suprised?
Willing to die for those saving a building with over a million children inside
A double helix represents my history I don't need a book to listen to
Symbolic remarks I'm writing in the dark with visions so Hieroglyphical
The pictures falsh full course collision forge my vision, a dead smile
Land slide destroy my home in the gorgeous day I live in exile
You've never witnessed seeing guns fired, innocent individuals shot
Ripping and penetrating flesh that reseembles synicale, though its not
Now this shit is getting out of hand torture, in all sesmical spots
I'd try physicaly but it feels as if I have no hands like digital clocks
Rogue in vogue control my whole globe so really I don't know, though
I can uphold my own so don't for one second think I wont explode
Before you die I'll kick your whole body off of about eleven cliffs
Put you in your coffin and roll it off the top of Mount Everest
It's sick in life stab the belly of the beast then twist the knife
The most valuable thing to him is nothing more than his life
He has nothing left wife murdered along with his family of ten kids
Now the biggest pain is toturing the individual and letting him live


"My face it inmprinted in the ground"

all can reall say is it's deep as all hell. Props

[3rdWorld]

this was an amazing piece... as Madlyrics said this was deep.
I liked he way you set it out, and the flow was usually great, couple bits didnt flow right to me... or maybe thats just how i was reading it. the meaning in this song went straight to the heart. Props to you

[Atti]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho....php?p=54364554

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=323200

thank you.

[Vacent.]

this peice was deep and dope..... loved it nothing really to say except i really enjoyed it good job

[Axeshun]

Thank you very much to all who left feed, bump

[Twixn...]

i stole the pic for my sig...

that is all.

hahaha ill hit this up with some feed later tonight.

[Axeshun]

Bump 2

[Diversity.]

hmm i like your expression and imagery... but i think the flow was slow in parts, you had heat through-out the peice but only in spots. i think that this was very creative and an overall original topic. i love the picture very vivid but i think there is so much more you could have done with this peice of work. neway for what its worth this was good but not great. keep droppin str8 heat and elivate to your potential.

b.e.z.

peace.

[Axeshun]

Bump 3...just want a bit more feed.

[P. Mortuus]

WTF at bumping such an old piece man.... :/

Anyhow, your piece had many grammatical mistakes which eally fucked up the flow for me man, you tried too much on the vocab point and this recked your sentence structure, just take the first sentence for example..you should have had a pause after virtues to make it easier to read and correct. No doubt though, keep trying and actually write up something more recent and better thought out. Stay up^.