We don't need you (all alone)

[The Vortex]

nice emotional opening bars. i like starting verses with outbursts if i can
it got a bit similar to emenems usual rants with the wif/girlfriend beef thing.but w/e shit happens to us allso em didnt originate that ish just got big on it somehow.
kim and all

nice flow and technical abilities displayed as well......... i see you be working hard on the flow and emotion element.....,,,,,,,,,,good coz i can get wit it f'sho...........


good ish

are you familiar with bobby digital of wutang clan............he had a crazy tune when he and a bitch are dissing eachother to death...sic......

your verse ended a bit abruptly i reckon..worked well as a shhort joint still


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[Da Patriot]

dis iz an eye opener

[P. Mortuus]

Emotional no doubt...soem parts were aightish with technics but overall i believe it was the emotion which carried this piece. Not enojyable as knowing it has happened to you. Something which shouldn't happen in natural order but does. I beleive that you've done a pretty good thing by using writing as your output of emotions. Stay up na mean.