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Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it
damn retard you mess your knowledge half at best
cause dude actually looked to find skills on mapquest
see you trying to impress, going for some record dude..
..for the most battles up and not one win for you
n this site is full of class got legends galore
fl is for developing talent. and you cant even picture yours
im bored dawg so ima expose this fake hoe
and we all can dig your lines. up cause there so fucking old
lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution
So, I signed this contract killin…while u'll get signed off
& if I recited it back at u, this would be ur last write off
Fuck mentorin u...I'll damage whatever voters hope for u
"OH SHIT" >, read my verse & that's his best ever quotable
hit u wit every law, & a brick, it’s gonna be a hell of a journey
I'm trippin off my talent, while ur trip is propelled thru a gurney
No question, I’m bashin this dude, scorned on his best day
If we argued his point, it would be in the form of a essay
Fuckin imigrant you aint nothing, the same as the other shit's
youll get to see the land of oppertunity as I bury you under it
meh
damn retard you mess your knowledge half at best
cause dude actually looked to find skills on mapquest
nah, played
see you trying to impress, going for some record dude..
..for the most battles up and not one win for you
heh,
n this site is full of class got legends galore
fl is for developing talent. and you cant even picture yours
meh, weak
im bored dawg so ima expose this fake hoe
and we all can dig your lines. up cause there so fucking old
ok..
few ok concepts i seen, some of this material is kind of bland and had not good set-ups, it was either too much of a statement or wasnt worded to its fullest potential... step up that creativity and harshness.
vs
lose the user title bitch, its wak & there’s no disputin
When I run .exe, its proven, we'll watch his own execution
cool, wordin cud be a lil harsher tho.
So, I signed this contract killin…while u'll get signed off
& if I recited it back at u, this would be ur last write off
ehh, iight
Fuck mentorin u...I'll damage whatever voters hope for u
"OH SHIT" >, read my verse & that's his best ever quotable]
mehh, could be harsher,
hit u wit every law, & a brick, it’s gonna be a hell of a journey
I'm trippin off my talent, while ur trip is propelled thru a gurney
iight
No question, I’m bashin this dude, scorned on his best day
If we argued his point, it would be in the form of a essay
ehh, needs to be harsher
the wording is wat you need to focus on now, you have the right concepts in place but you just need to word out the punch a little bit harsher in the connection, but your on the verge of some nice ideas.
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lol... rushed my post
v/Ant
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yo easy battle to decide...exempt ur verse was real basic and boring, best part in ur whole drop was ur closer which made me laugh shit was dope, you shouldve came that harsh and creative the whole battle and u wouldve won cuz antonio didnt go that hard...antonio ur verse was decent but i seen better from you, but u still came hard enough to take the win, i liked the .exe line shit was mad creative and it was a dope punch..so for havin the better punchers, concepts, and wit..imma have to go with antonio
v/antonio banderas
hit this yo!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322898
how can a .exe line be creative that shit has been done more then Paris
both off them suck,,,, let me kno who can beat me.....if i had to pick i guess Ant won though...Ima end his career tho come let him battle me.......Get em
We Gon Do It Like Dis
sorry to free post, but honestly thats the first time i seen it so its new to me..didnt want you to bitch and think my vote was BS..but yo hit the link!Originally Posted by Exempt
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