"All You Need Is.." - D.H.Brixton.

[B.I.Detained.]

"All You Need is.."


All you need is..
..a candle lit room and a chrome wrapped boom box.
Nothing too heavy but enough to make the room rock.
Cuz if its too hard then the lovings bound to soon stop.
But pushing too far will only time back the doom clock..
So take it easy.. take a breath and lets re-stock,
Throw a line thats cheesy from Macbeths "come & be hot".
When the time is right, she'll throw an anchor from this keen dock
Fuck it.. Just for now I'm Barry Whites only seen flop.
Suck it.. Drippin' from my brow I've got the sweat down still locked.
Unlucky.. I still ain't made a move on this teen god girl copped.

"I have no idea what to fucking do.. shit..
still looking good though. Fuck it, here goes..!"
*Flushes toilet*

All I need is..
..a confidence boost to let loose on this girl.
& get attention for a sec ' from her twisting her pearls..
But then - a light pink swirl catches her chin unfurled,
& I'm a mess again.. this god damn beautiful girl!
I wish we'd met as friends.. on another plain in this world.
JUST GIVE IT A WHIRL!
But I hesistate.
I fucking hate it when I hesistate!
Cuz I never go straight for the bait, & I draw out the date,
till she stoops to her watch & tells me its late.
Not today, I'm not gonna be your reprobate..
I'm set to wait, till this diamond is set to grate.

"11:30pm? Damn.. I'll go for an uncut diamond.
Just give me something.. Ahhh, I guess this is it."

All this story needs is..
.. a man in it, some spirit and bold choices.
Instead of some kid who's content on hearing voices
In his head, from the dead? "Go ahead & feel exploited".
I'd be open to steel bars if I wasn't double jointed..
On the other side's, a doting danzel dissapointed.
Wag the finger all you like but I can't handle when its pointed..
Bones tell a tale of their own, & feel what the joints did.
So with both our loins hid, I kiss her cheek & leave..
.. fulfilled in the fact that my needs won't grieve..
.. & you see, she'll be there same time tomorrow,
waiting for ME.

"Ok, do I go to sleep? Or fast forward to tomorrow?
Choices, choices, choices.."

All you EVER need..
.. is a little imagination to tell,
a feel good tale to yourself, when you're locked in a prison cell.

-D.H.Brixton.
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[B.I.Detained.]

links will go here.

[SirusX]

Drugs are bad. 1 time for the mind of DH Brix0n.


cool verse. the Title is smart, first and 2nd verse cool.
third cool 2 but i donno.

this is the best part 2 me

All I need is..
..a confidence boost to let loose on this girl.
& get attention for a sec ' from her twisting her pearls..
But then - a light pink swirl catches her chin unfurled,
& I'm a mess again.. this god damn beautiful girl!
I wish we'd met as friends.. on another plain in this world.


^flows solid.

and i like this part in it...

All I need is..
..a confidence boost to let loose on this girl.
...
...
& I'm a mess again.. this god damn beautiful girl!

if u get what im sayin... 2 bars that are on the same rhyme scheme but u come back to the girl part. just some girl. cool drop DH Brixx

[Deviate]

Twas nice.. As they say.. Good to see you're still writing, still got that great flow. You write with conviction and interest. Purposeful and effective. The storyline was primarily impressive because of the imagery and metaphor, was enjoyable to read. The twist at the end was a nice addition also. It was quite informal, which isn't really my style, but who I am to critique someone else's stylistic preference? Good work.

[B.I.Detained.]

Thanks, I'll get to your latest, Dev.

[Brandon Heat]

no links... CLOSED... unless you leave my joint open... and you can't post links after I submit this reply..! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA









slick drop though... *proud*

[Tragedian.]

I think I left feed on this in SS. This was a very beautiful piece that you put together perfectly.The way you opened it was very creative with very smooth flow. And you had me intrested.All through. This to me is not worth HOF due to the lack of effort I have seen you come way better in your drops and this to me would be decent lol.
But very nice, keep up. hit my sig please.

[GodIlla]

Yo nigga da first verse was tight da second aight I liked da way you came in but da third was kinda plain but good shit my nig keep em comen

[GodIlla]

"O" an what u mean by read da rules?

[B.I.Detained.]

Thanks. top..