Paranoia

[X-treme]

New stuff from me,Used to be here a while ago,Anyways now im back,fuck the intro,what yall think?

Yo i cant be bothered with all the question asking
Am i just paranoid,or are they really laughing?
i should jus be basking in the sunshine,enjoying myself
but im stuck in my room,thinking stupid,annoying myself.
This cant be good for my health wondering if im in reallity
maybe i should seek help befor this problem leads to fatality
coz gradulay its deterating,those people aint even staring
And the people i call friends start to act like they aint even caring
my social lifes wearing thin,i dont know where to being
but i need to seek help befor razor blades start cutin my skin
stumbling im stuttering,and the doc jus gives anti-depresants
start to quetions weather im in the lords presseance
this aint pleasnt nah this shit is jus depressing
people say i should think myself lucky,but i cant count 1 blessing
i aint messing,people are watching,sweats just hit my brow
Pick up the pills fuck it,show i end this now?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...83#post5362683
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...96#post5362696

[X-treme]

ZZZZZZ why is this being slept on

Upin

[X-treme]

yo come on

[P. Mortuus]

It's an aight piece..nothing in it that hasn't been done before and polished better. For a begginer it's aight you have to keep at it tackling harder and realer subjects thann a mere point of view get me. Tackle local, national, political, personal and social topics as well. Plus using references of sub topics is good to. Basically speaking...you have a long way to go before cometing with top writers but then again like i said keep at it and keep on the writers tip tackling better topics and it'll all work out get me.