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Thread: Hmm...Thoughts...

  1. #1
    B Newz
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    hmm...

    vocabulary is a must to get a rhymithic flux when delivering flows//
    or throwin blows like tyson,sting like a bee,jabbin kids like lightning//
    i be the enticing pirate stiffling your train of thought,comatosed//
    the state i put you in when i induse my venomous vapor//
    break the skin with schraded blends strainin kids like oj so you can concentrate when i dominate//
    all eyes on me like tupac cuz i do pop with intrusive thoughts//
    make you lose ya jaw when i rock shows i rock foes,with jaw blows//
    lockdown the dog pound,cuz i be the dog catcher to keep cats safe//
    i eat gat spray,then upchuck ya ammunition and start spittin shrapnel//
    its obvious you need to invest in a kevlar vest before i disember ya chest//
    from within ya ribcage i split vanes with switchblades to stop ya vitals//
    the main cannibal eatin kids at recitals when my rhymes is emulated//
    i stay violatin like busta bust, bustin guts with 1 pound bats//
    let the ground meet ya back up close and personal,make ya spine jump out ya back//
    so relax when im in your area,sick like malaria devourin kids from within//
    im airborne when i get ground clearance to pound clerics with jagged mirrors//
    so you can reflect from within,so catch a glance and get smashed by the vigilante//

  2. #2
    word.some nice vocabs in there,got better as u went on, some lines had nice wordplay,and you had alot of multis,good job do ur thing dun.1
    "Mah girls are like boomerangs, no matter how far I throw em they always come back"

  3. #3
    B Newz
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    appreciate that. listenin to busta with a tribe called quest on that track called scenario gets me in the mood.

  4. #4
    B Newz
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    whassuuuuuuup^^^

  5. #5
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    its good same as sincere said ur vocab wus good

  6. #6
    B Newz
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    word uppin.

  7. #7
    B Newz
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    up.

  8. #8
    Bmack
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    Not bad dawg..elevate

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