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[B.I.Detained.]

Ok, man. Wasn't sure where you wanted to go with this.. think you may have confused yourself a little. The beginning had that "jump straight into the deep end" feel about it & it had me vexed to where you were gonna go with it. I thought it was a pretty dope start to be honest. Then you start getting spiritual afterwards, and it made the piece half as good as it was. Work on your flow, man.. I'm not saying this to be a cunt, just letting you know. A few more relevant rhymes to patch up some benevelant lines.. watow. Nice piece, just needs touching up.. like my Mom :-)

[Synonym]

Word, this was a good peice okay imagery but didn't have the "dope" touches and quality that sparked in my head for some reason but it was great to see how you took the topic and just went with it I wouldn't expect that it would be that deep and the vocab helped me understand more of exactly what happened nothing plain here. overall nice drop to me I liked it alot.

[Penlord]

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