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  1. December 4th, 2006, 01:11 PM #1
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    SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    Simon my idol, what is it you preach?
    Each to his own, flames burn & reach
    A correctional convention, depreciation
    So I’ll buy perfumed balms to………………
    ………………..cleanse the psalms

    I knocked on house number 23….
    There lived a Shepard………….

    He cleansed my soles, burning embers & coals
    Stole a few minutes reciting the Kingdoms goals
    Boils on the whore, spoils from wars…………
    Plus the oiled foils, neighing silently in moulds
    I listen intently with intention walking in pain
    I fear Satan accursed, my mind bursts & stains
    The Shepard drowning against will, fenced bills
    Fenced heads on spikes, a river of bloody ills
    Stilts of shame covered in quilts of gained kills
    And there I stand in the valley of death alone
    a dead Shepard navigating a practitioner home

    Simon the disciple, what is it you preach?
    All for 1 & 1 for all bring death to the leech
    a community sharing communion.....
    Communication by radios made of plutonium
    So I’ll share the perfumed balms....................
    ............................To jointly cleanse the psalms

    I knocked on house number 91....
    There lived the protected............

    He held me afar, gleaming eyes in fair par
    Judging my grey shell, bloody eyes & scar
    Recoiled in spite, uncoiled his might.........
    Let loose a toiled fight, my spoiled delight
    I fall knee weak a martyr, stumped stature
    Protector speaks he shouts me a fracture
    Mirages vanish & I hang dead from a tree
    Resurrected to witness a dissolving history
    He’s Devolving with a revolver of misery
    Mercy! Mercy Jehovah, reeking of leprosy
    And there stood the lord, with him water came
    He unravelled my mind & doused the flame



    I then knocked on a Gnostic’s house.......
    And there lived the Cyrene family..........

    Simon of Cyrene, what did you say?
    Carrying Jesus’ cross that awful day
    you were nailed, blood further entailed
    Hailed in mockery, the whips sailed
    And you said, “Lord, why have you
    Forsaken me?” You bruised blue & red
    so I’ll buy the pen & sell the balms......
    ..........Re-write your due upon psalms

    If Simon of Cyrene had been impaled
    On the cross, then had Jesus’ prayers been
    Answered in the Gethsemane Gardens?
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...37#post5336537
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  3. December 4th, 2006, 03:39 PM #3
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    Blat Blat my Gat.
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  4. December 4th, 2006, 04:05 PM #4
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    This was a pretty interesting drop. I think I voted for you in SS too. I liked it.. it had a kind of poetic & deep feel to it. The flow was nice. I liked that you used alot of descriptive words & really got the imagery going. Well done.
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    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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  5. December 4th, 2006, 06:36 PM #5
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    Yup, thanks man.
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  6. December 5th, 2006, 05:13 AM #6
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

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  7. December 5th, 2006, 10:06 AM #7
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    This was very creative, I gave this a look in SS but didn't bother lol, but i regret that, this peice was a very good read, it flowed nicely through out the whole drop, the way you opened the drop caught my eye and made me want to finish the read, and the place for the pic was very creative and fit in perfectly, nice peice, hit the sig.
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    Damn P.- you do it every time...Amazing drop...the flow of it was great....your discripitive wording really brought the imagery to life..as I could envision it in my mind...just your word choice and placement alone carried the piece to impeckable boundries..I read this in S.S. but didn't have the time to read your challenger's drop so I didn't vote..but this was a very well written and descripitive piece...I love'd how you went about incorporating the bible into it...really made me think....overall this was just another good drop from you baron...


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  10. December 5th, 2006, 10:34 AM #10
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    u seem more tha poetic type kinda pathetic i f i might...say
    u must be gay right...lol.......back to church.boy
    hope U got Skillz.
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  11. December 5th, 2006, 01:27 PM #11
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    Quote Originally Posted by HU$LER
    u seem more tha poetic type kinda pathetic i f i might...say
    u must be gay right...lol.......back to church.boy

    What should have i out there...i have done many many pieces ranging from new kid Gangksta to necrophilia to religious to rants...plus i don't go to church i'm a muslim...i believe in being aware about all religions though and to be fair...you are a "pathetic" analyser.
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    Re: SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

    Mirages vanish & I hang dead from a tree
    Resurrected to witness a dissolving history
    He’s Devolving with a revolver of misery
    Mercy! Mercy Jehovah, reeking of leprosy

    ^^amazing...this piece was not what i would consider an open mic piece..pretty much at all, which might be the reason youve had a tough time getting responses, but none the less it was spectacular...alot..alot..alot of description..word choice was phenomanal, the vocab was just exceptional..great job..
    "tape cassette in back pocket, all the songs he left behind
    a watch on his shoes, i guess hes running out of time
    as hes walking down the street hes talking to himself a little much
    vibing to the beat to hard, but he dont give a fuck
    all he knows is that wherever he goes, hell follow his soul
    his feetll take him there, so yea he follows his soles"-Vinci
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