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    Convict- Cliff. Hanger Ft Baron

    Convict: Climaxed after Death


    Baron= Bold
    Cliff. Hanger= The rest of it

    A convicted con man conned on the court stand
    Justice Plays blinds man buff without a chance hand
    Crash land into waiting arms, blue & black with spots
    A symmetrical polka dot, dot to dot, criss-cross plots
    Coke pots lying next to the hexed officer, he’s asleep
    Photos in his pocket, a wife & kid sacrificed to heats
    Let me take you there with a fair brief about his pleas
    Please judge him with bias, a Dais raised to his knees

    Fuck the speech...Time for the action to start knee-deep


    The truck comes to a stop, a man steps out covered in shackles
    police open the door, a homeless women watches and cackles
    Man plea’s to the lord, as he lowers his head
    But the lord can’t save him now, man has eaten his final piece of bread
    People stop and they look, as man walks the steps, still in his prayer
    A women stops and stairs, he gives her a glare,
    knowing she has him judged by bright orange jump suite he wares
    Escorts open double doors, and the bailiff is standing there
    Man knows he didn’t do it....But the state doesn’t care
    He sees a child wearing a necklace a wealthy man bought her
    He sees his daughter, his daughter will never again see her father
    And beside is a son, a young man by now already on the run
    Just like his father, he takes penny's, but never leaves one

    With his ghetto life appearance, and his apparent depression
    Just like the tattoos on man’s face, he leaves a lasting impression.......
    The jury now decision make'n, mans like for the take'n, the court case is pending
    Man closes eyes and a angel is descending as he hears his life’s ending
    Man's eyes still shut as the angel says sprit lifting words
    the most bountiful thing he has ever heard, is not a vowel adjective or verb
    This sound, this indescribable sound, heard over the gavel slapping
    The crunch of a cocoon reveals a butterfly’s wings freely flapping

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    DAMN this was dope as piece. both of u came nice. cliff i think is the first thing ive read from u. if this was ur first topical then damn u gotta pretty good future. pak usual dopeness from u fam. nice vocab from both n dope visuals aka imagery. pak ur verse stuck out a lil bit. overall a nice piece from both

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    Thx didnt kno this was drop'd lol

    Thx for the colabb pak

    Thx for the feed aswell

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    goddamn, very fuckin good OM. i loved the whole concept and the image you put at the top complimented the scenery. then you used references to a "baliff" and prayer to make it more of back in tha day situation, because i remember what a baliff is from reading in high school so it jumped out at me. the opening was great, nice way to inform the reader on the actual event taking place. then cliff mastered the whole scene itself, i could invision what everything and everyone looked like. also, nice vocab usage and great way to end it.

    shit like this makes me wanna write better OM's, fuckin inspiration

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=316418 <-i'd appreciate it

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    Re: Convict- Cliff. Hanger Ft Baron

    Quote Originally Posted by B.Nesse
    goddamn, very fuckin good OM. i loved the whole concept and the image you put at the top complimented the scenery. then you used references to a "baliff" and prayer to make it more of back in tha day situation, because i remember what a baliff is from reading in high school so it jumped out at me. the opening was great, nice way to inform the reader on the actual event taking place. then cliff mastered the whole scene itself, i could invision what everything and everyone looked like. also, nice vocab usage and great way to end it.

    shit like this makes me wanna write better OM's, fuckin inspiration

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=316418 <-i'd appreciate it

    Lol I didnt think my verse was that good lol... Lo@ inspriration

    Umm i got banned wtf???????/
    Back too the old account with the shit record

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    Re: Convict- Cliff. Hanger Ft Baron

    IIte nvm i gusse i deserved the bann for free posting

    Its only for a weeek soo its all good


    N your shit alreadyy closed?

    Send me a link when u need feed or sum

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    Re: Convict- Cliff. Hanger Ft Baron

    nice but not an better collab then your last ish baron,its nothing personally its just the topic itself wasn't really that appealing to me,but the read was wonderful and your pic actually added on to the experiance of this om,nice imagery you both held your ground in this nothing really that i didn't like besides the structure, but thats an personal thing,at times when reading this i felt the complexity that you guys were trying to use to mae this different and not you everyday ending ...good job to both. Rtf honestly famo

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    Thx^^^


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    Upppppp

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