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  1. October 20th, 2006, 04:02 PM #16
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    thx yo uppin some more feed
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  2. October 21st, 2006, 02:48 AM #17
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    nice drop...had some good lines that really stood out...then some that just threw off the whole drop...had a basic strutre...which kinda got me reading but not really...flow was nice wasnt off to much....multies we're meh..lets just say you couldve done alot better....the topic was nice...you did it pretty creative...nice drop..hit up my new om As I...
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  3. October 21st, 2006, 03:25 AM #18
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    Everything was good, aside from a (Very) minor imagery problem I think this is an excellent piece. Check this -http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=313372

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  4. October 22nd, 2006, 05:55 PM #19
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    link doesnt work for it
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  5. October 23rd, 2006, 03:19 PM #20
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  6. October 28th, 2006, 11:44 AM #21
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  7. October 28th, 2006, 11:49 AM #22
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    it was nice son, have little more umph in your rhymes and vocab but it was great. yo, plus yor age, you very good. try to leave your remarks on my new post. its called "2day Will Lead In 2morrow. its on open mic
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  8. October 28th, 2006, 11:53 AM #23
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    shiiiiiiiit, i'll vote for you to for rookie of year. lol
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  9. October 28th, 2006, 03:13 PM #24
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    thx yo post the link here if i win lol thx again and i'll check out ya peice
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  10. October 29th, 2006, 04:13 PM #25
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  11. October 29th, 2006, 04:27 PM #26
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    this was a great piece in mi mind pyro nice elevation and your rhyme scheme of 3 line AAA BBB CCC DDD<< that wasa style i used back in the day and i have yet to see people use it again except til now...which was a koo scheme ya know also...your emotion was nicely put and it was fire...it stayed on point with nice vocab and lyrical content...a basic flow with a real complexed multies and metaphors that detailed the image to a percise storyline which made it unique man...nice drop pyro big ups to you homie!.

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  12. November 4th, 2006, 06:55 PM #27
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    thx man and i'll hit up ur om uppin some more feed
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