Nice and sweet i like this...it had some good parts and some ok parts but that was it...flowed well during most of the peice but you're strutre threw some of it off...i was feeling the creativty of the topic..the only thing i didn't like was the vocab i felt that it was over done and just didnt turn me on to the drop...maybe next time lower it..good peice though keep up.
Empire
This was a good piece, good vocabulary, great imagination provided also, and nice structure.
This had and showcased all the components to a successful and well-respected piece. Great job!
RTF on my OM "The Blind Perspective"It's a quick key, lol.
thanks, and I will soon I promise
uppin feed
sup fly wheezy ma neezy,nice pioece u got right here, i liked the rhymes. i liked the fresh vocab. i liked the techno coloured imagery you painted within a very nicely concpted and crqafted piece.which showed good imagination and artistry
so prpages and big up yo game
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thanks
last time I'm gonna up this I think
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