Freestyle

[Lil.Sleep]

I Ride Up In Sumthing The Same Color As Nutmeg The Inside The Same Color As Banana Nut Bread//
Thats Enough Said I Treat The Club Like A Chess Game Capture Yo Queen And Im Closer To Checkmate //
Betta Check Yo Mate Fo I Put That Thang Out And Blows His Brains Out And Let It Hang Out In Front Of His Hang Out//
So Try To Run Up Wit Them Small Tools While Im Ridin On 22s Ill Pull Out 2 Tools That Uh Have You On Channel 2 News//
Thats Y I Dont Fuck Wit U Fag Hoes Mad Cuz Yo Girl Follow Where
Ever My Jag Goes I Got Uh Beam That Follow Where Ever My Mag Goes//
I Tag Clothes Re-arragne Features And I Also Tag Sneakers//
I Switch From The Nutmeg To A Grey Rose The Inside The Same Color As Buleberry Eggos//
Where Ever My A Goes The K Follows So Hollows U Will Sollow//
So I Hope U Like Modeling A Vest Or Next Week Yo Mama Gon Be Modeling Uh Black Dress Cuz U Sleeping In Uh Chest//
And U Aint Uh Nightwalker U Deadman Leave Em Linkin He Uh Redman
Oh My New Benz The Colors Of Uh Pespi Can

[Lil.Sleep]

The Least Yall Can Do Is Reply Im New Here

[Lil.Sleep]

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[P. Mortuus]

Aight you can rhyme and everythign, but then again you need to understand that you have to sort out the layout as presentation is key to om's..plus a propa title would help to as right now your on the track to getting this closed. Furthermore, you need 2 links to keep this open with a proper title. Use more imagery as it'll make your piece more interesting and easier to understand.