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Thread: just fire

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    The Beat Of Philly QaaHolic's Avatar
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    just fire

    i got original flow, the haters trying to stop my show,
    thats the reason im gone

    stack my doe im loading my 4.
    while im chilling on the 4,

    bout to let my 44 blow,
    shout out to my niggas lock down

    cusin charles and uncle joe
    i did 2 years took it on the chin

    cause i was bucking at the twin
    i dont really rap know i

    dont really scrap i just let my gat go clap
    im to little fight but damn my height

    im grp my toast and leave you niggas
    out of sight. from s.p yall niggas no where i be.

    24 i dont play
    fuck u i dear you to come around my way.

    i dont fuck wit yall cause
    yall gay. my grass green while yall fucking wit hay

    my sqaud cons wit yay... while yall talk thru the wire
    like kanye.

    im sick of these beefs
    so i take to the street
    unloading my heat

    i pop off real slugs while yall internet thugs
    yall get stepped on like bugs

    yall niggas get kremated
    thats dust swept under the rug

    its kinda like quick sand how i leave you under the mud.

    you fuckin plug all around philly i gets buzz
    and the ladies show me love

    so do the pheins cause i show them bud
    or crack yall rhymes is wack.

    im moving packs while the only ones you
    carry is the one on your back.
    im like t-mac cause the ones on my back

    nigga wanna box but im straped
    clat- clat- clat

    its a rap
    from the bling of my mac
    i'll take your beans wit my mac

    i run my city
    cause i roll wit my twins just like diddy


    holla (#1 rated all day) get it back pack
    Last edited by QaaHolic; October 20th, 2006 at 04:30 AM
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    once again where ur links

    and pick a diffrent strucure and read other peoples for you drop with Om's Looking this way just looking out 4 u

    Not Another... See Right, Writer, C.W Line
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    well i thought it was hard to follow really, with all the rhymin and the structure was fucked...it was basic, but yea there's a lot of room to improve
    HOW YOU GONNA LET A GURL BEAT YOU?

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    yeah man this piece is meh...

    it's a little too "gangsta" for me...all the shit is "ima thug, ima gangsta" and you prolly none of that...but thats besides the point

    flow= wack
    structure = needs improvement
    meta's = non existant
    rhymes = well...they rhymed...thats all i can say

    4/10 keep elevating
    Yo it's RhymeSkeme...I'm back bitches!!
    Bloodz4Life hacked my account and got me banned...
    But I have returned to hook up with the old crewmates!!

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    32 Bars of My Life

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    structure is fixed
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    if you view fucking write
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    photojenic fuck you fool
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    closed

    shit feedback given

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