10 lines
due in 24
drop ASAP
no d/r or bullshit votes
10 lines
due in 24
drop ASAP
no d/r or bullshit votes
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this is my checkin
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dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
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^wtf is that?
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
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^^FUCKED UP NUGGA my bad
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?Originally Posted by Angel Of Dopenes
No One Said hi 2 Me
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
*Batting practice refers to masturbation
**Strike Out King is someone who couldnt gid pussy if they was a female
^^can be found here
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up 1
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i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
^^rofl.. lmfao.. *dead*
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
^^lol
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
^^meh
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
^^meh
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
^^lol
vs
nothing... srry man... nothing.... damn....
V/aod
Vote DQed...it wasnt that one sided Philly..
-Smoka
Last edited by SmokaJoka; October 20th, 2006 at 01:44 AM
^^^^its Straight fam
but UP 2
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dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
Quote:
Originally Posted by Angel Of Dopenes
No One Said hi 2 Me
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
nice punches and personals in that verse.
vs
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
those were the hottest in ur verse fam. i've seen better, u drop unxpected of him comin hard like he did. Next time. U lacked the harder punches and personals. elevate more.
NO hate to either of u. GOod job tho.
V/JFC.
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up 3 dont sleep on this
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sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
kill point
Vs.
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
Kill point
I felt that both did good and had nice personals but JFC took it with wording. The way he worded his made it more affective than A.o.D. that's my opinion no hate. Good shit @ both!
V = JFC
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L.S.N.A.M.C.
i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck
no
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
good crew personal
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
nice, best line whole verse
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look
pretty good
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill
not feeling this closer
vs.
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*
no
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**
meh, wasnt feeling this
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
lol cool
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
pretty good line here
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft
dope final draft personal
v/AOD for beign more constant and creative.
no hate
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings
lmao, nice
Vs.
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you
lol, this was alright
JFC-i liked all the personals you used, nice/decent punches throughout, solid flow and structure
AOD-you had 1 crew personal, no nameplay, you had some decent punches but i felt a couple of your bars were just statements, solid flow and structure
vote-JFC for an overall better verse, no hate
hit this up honestly
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i know ur first name. ima prove that this bastard sucks
live action news. this just in!.............and he wack as fuck<---lol...nice line
is JFC straight? over this question i ponder
everyone experiences 2 minutes of hate...
...but i thought ur verse would be longer<---decent
i'm sorry to brake it down like this, but ur a gay whore dude
leave in a state so bad Atheists will pray for you<---iight
you have freedom of speech. ur words suck. mine are hotter than soot
cuz though you stand for you writes, no one else bothered to look<---so-so
ur broke as fuck. and you have taxes. you get gayer still
can't say you duck me. cuz you can't even pay for the bill<---iight closer
vs
dis dude Angel Of Dopenes hes my favorite actress
he should tryout for baseball, he wont gid in....
............but hes highy trained at batting practice*<---decent
he trys to convince us hes dope, hes dying to bling (shine)
i could throw a bitch at him ass first....
............he wouldnt hit cuz hes the strike out king**<---iight
sad much? need some time off? need some time to cope?
just cuz i LMAO a line doesnt mean its good....
it means i laughed my ass off cuz u thought it was dope<---stetched and forced
AOD is LLL material....at least thats what he thinks
u say ur dope? BITCH thats false advertising
...............someone take away his wings<---not bad
u try ta cover ur face wid ur record like a vinyl mask
LOP needs to revise his paper...
cuz im pretty sure u shouldnt have made the final draft<---good diss
overall...
aod - my fav. line was your opener, that was a good personal. and you had a couple other lines that were iight with some pretty decent concepts. you had more consistancy in my opinion too.
jfc - i like your closer and a couple other lines were iight, but some of the punches werent direct or witty enough. your drop didnt have enough consistancy, but it did flow good for the most part.
i think aod won this w/ better concept and more consistancy.
but i cant poll fellaz, i got shit for posts...but i will if i get enough b4 this closes. good battle though.
both yall hit my battle on FL plz, its in my siggy.
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