Led Poetic
Split.
okie... 14 lines, no little kid shit, just maintain your integrity, nah'm sizzlin?
Word.
here's your topics, drop me three to choose from also.
Complacent
Love is Competition
How to Expedite a Lifetime
woooooooord. due in.... let's say... an hour after you drop my topics?
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Eh its only 14 lines i'd say like 20-25 minutes max mabye 30 minutes...
But why dont we just chose the same topic
Genous Gardens
Complacent
Love is Competition
How to Expedite a Lifetime
Purity test
Gethsemane gardens
Broken Condom
Last edited by Celia Fate; October 18th, 2006 at 11:39 PM
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I could definately work with genous gardens... if you meant genous as productive and not genius. or I could do genius gardens too, lol. whatever you meant by that I'm cool with.
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Originally Posted by Led Poetic
complacent means lack of giving a fuck basically. genous works though if it works for you.
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Genous Gardens
the horizon has betrayed me
faithlessly slayed these tree's I've toiled and tended too
once, the sun displayed the
necessary rays to raise these seeds through soil and dew
BUT THE CLOUDS HAVE COME!
they strum thunderous chords mine crops can't afford to hear
What they've proudly sung,
has finally done in, what for one man has rung his sweat and tears
My work has perished
that which I cherished is scared stiff and dead by this hollowed sky
I, but a pair of fists
cared for this enough to swear it lives even as I watched it die
But she'll come back
this cracked surface actes to further the purpose, I know it's so
We'll have our laughs
and stab our backs as we tap nervous beats wordless to help it grow
we were once a garden
but pardoned the productivity so as to harken forth our animosity
this soils starvin'
dry and parched and I'll pour it chivalry until it again reflects what it cost me
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Gethsemane Gardens
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Silouetted footprints hauntingly follow me
As i walk acrost the minipulated deserted earth
Saturated in sour reminders of screams and pleas
Divident slabs of crustations with nothing left to berth
As the darkening clowds roll in
from the heavens everything turns black
in the heat of the passion no longer clothing
too intense now to even start to look back
the gods becon for me to do it but i refuse
the voices echo in my head with resistants
the clouds lighten up, and i see my muse
shrouded by light with a sertian persistance
a young female, just a mere eight year old pesant
girl with tattered garments hanging from her body
A flash back in the past, now realizing the present
and what i was told to do, as i contimplate sadly
about what i must do, the girl touches my shoulder
and tells me to let go, with that i listen and go insane
I plunge the dagger into his heart onto the boulder
inside the sacred place people know as Gethsemane
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Good shit man... now lets get some votes on this battle....
Lol at me tryna make this poetry casue i was to lazy to rhyme and it still ended up topical
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Yup... Still wiating on atleast one vote... You all fucking suck.
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I'm going Split here. The internal multis flowed brilliantly. Led, you topped him in structuring but his concept was more effectively executed through his imagery and word use.
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IJL: Because 'NAMBLA' was already taken.
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upp..... leave links to OM's and shit and I'll return the favor... or do an unofficial vote for your battle............................................ ......
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