SonnyK9 Vs. WestBank
Topic- "The Holocaust"
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SonnyK9
WestBank504
SonnyK9 Vs. WestBank
Topic- "The Holocaust"
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No less than 16 Lines
300 Posts To Vote
No Hate/Love/D.R. Votes
Check, And G/L
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Check...this Will B First Time Topical Battle
When Do We Hav To Drop By Blood............................................. ...........check...........
Ima Renegade.........and i aint Neva Been Afraid...
My bad my bad...I forgot Drop Time.....Drop Time will be 2morrow @ Midnight (Eastern Time)Originally Posted by WestBank504
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Safe Safe Rite Westbank Goodluck N Let This B A Entertainin Battle N Ill Try Not To Drop Some Lame Shit But Yall B Suprised ................................
Ima Renegade.........and i aint Neva Been Afraid...
iilght k9 lets see about dis battle...
and word. ur wack... wtf r u nigga,, blood, or crip???
answer dis 4 all da pplz iilght....
WHITES..Out.
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Wat U Noe About Crack.....?
Dont Not Free-Post in battles..Free post again in here and you will get bannedOriginally Posted by *WHITES*
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pm him if you must ask a question
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The Next posts should only be our drops..G/L Sonny and remember to Drop before 12 pm Wed. night
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The Holocaust
He walks under the Swastika proud & hearing
Screams from demeaned souls swearing & Tearing
He lost bearing but redeemed his honour by a shot
tipping another cadaver into the molten boiling pot
Rugged bones carrying skeletal forms for a street show
Showing mortals dead I’m mortified by the vehemence
Clemencies ridiculed & nullified by ceaser they stow
Away burnt corpses churned opuses of Hitler’s pretence
To purify & create a race of Aryan features I see
A race of savage creatures to distort the truth, hypocrisy
Cohesive in ways colouring flesh grey, children play
With charcoal stole from the burnt burials they sway
To and fro to swiftly put another near the ovens hole
It baptizes them whole, a hollow cause for a holocaust
Follow the course to see them efficiently achieve their goal
Tied, raped then burnt, a whole civilization torn & forced
As I sit, with the lingering smell of death in the air
I wondered & tried to understand it doesn’t seem fair
Blood splattered on my soiled clothes; tears down my face
Hoping that fate would cause an uprising of grace
Treated like possessed people, truly despised by these animals
Must I go first to the darkroom to be beheaded by German Cannibals?
Now the end for me is clear; I can feel my last breath draw near
I slip away in my next life, hoping nothing filled with racism & fear
Often pricked with racist chants it’s a biased political stance
Often thinking why people were tortured by the Swastika lance
still wondering will we ever or never recover from past time
Abused by Germans in frontlines they committed such a crime
I thought that the raw wounds would eventually heel
but the words only serve to feel the scar & further peel
Often to sit by my fellow cousin’s grave, trying to understand
The 2 Ft grave mound created by historic blood hounds
Am I living in sickly past memories do I need to disband
The nightmares given to me by Germany on false grounds
THERE YA GO WEST MY SHIT.....
Ima Renegade.........and i aint Neva Been Afraid...
^^^Sonny that was actually dope compared to yo other shit. see wut happens when u take ur time.....sorry 4 the freepost
T H E D I E N A S T Y
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I Know Wen Im Battlin I Aways Rush I Do It In Like Two Mins In Stead Of Thinkin N Usin Da Ten To 15 Mins I Hav
Safe For Da Drop..............................
Ima Renegade.........and i aint Neva Been Afraid...
Sonny's was dope... It was like an open mic. I haven't seen him alot around though... Where's the other dude?
Thanx For Da Info Niggerican
..........i Think Ive Found My Home In Battilin Wiv Topics Been Set West Drop Ya Shit Gggg We All Waitin.......................
Ima Renegade.........and i aint Neva Been Afraid...
http://www.eisenhowermemorial.org/im...ation-camp.jpg
Alone
Captured from Freedom, pulled from safety, and now to the unknown
Where is my family? Is my mind at sanction? But in all my mind is blown
Sitting, just pondering on a train…Damp Clothes, Pain, Hunger, but why is it true
I look around at the discolored faces, but this isn’t the place for a question to renew
Smoke billowing up in the distant, could our final stop lie just soon ahead
But then the smell of burning flesh reaches to me and my heart skips instead
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People yelling and screaming…so much chaos and confusion
I try to gather myself, but my body is trapped in this mind boggling delusion
I look for my family, but there is nothing but death and turmoil around
Men wearing two crooked lines give yelling demands for our ears to surround
All I can do is gaze in amazement, for this place is nothing spoke about before
I have heard of guns and battles, but to my eyes this is a different kind of war
The sun blazing down, smell of flesh and smoke, I can’t take the anguish and pain
What is the point of humans killing weaker versions of them just to entertain?
The crematory is off in the distance; the final cries of the dieing bring sorrow
Knowing that they had a family and were loved, but will not see another tomorrow
Days turn into weeks, weeks to months, and all we do is starve and work
Troops say the Russians are coming, so all we can do is carve our face a smirk
Everyday is just another struggle, thoughts of home bring sadden tears
Think of the worst, but this is living out a nightmare & testing our greatest fears
The corpses piled up are no different from us hostages alive at the camp to slave
We’re both left with no heart and alone to portray our own grave
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I can’t live anymore; this is just too much for my body to be abused
I have no life or family anymore. Remain in this realm or die…My mind is confused
Contemplating my death cause there has to be something better than this way
Should I request to be hung, or run and get struck by a gun with a bullet array
But I waited my time; death would not see me anytime soon, at least not yet
Cause we keep hearing about a savior, so how could my mind tend to forget
I keep hopes high, and a week later we see a plane fly into our vision
Bringing with it my life and soul and letting my heart feel to make a decision
I take to the ground and smile has a I hear the bullets berate camp, its happy to me
For it brings joy to our hearts to know that this is the sound of us to be free
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Decades later and I still remember the torture with a picture which is vivid in death
Sadness still surrounds with not knowing were my family is and bringing cold to breath
But thru all the pain and agony, lives were saved and not just tossed away
Bringing with them horrid details of the Holocaust, for which we pray for today
No life should be wasted, for our spirits should always remain strong
And I knew where my family was the whole time…..In my heart all along
R.I.P. to all the lives lost during the Holocaust
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Yo this was an nice battle I enjoyed reading both peaces there were points where i was like man thats deep and points where I felt diffrent.
West
you had an interesting peace I enjoyed reading it you truelly captured my intention with that peace. befor I read I thought to myself man this is an played topic oh well I need the credz lol, but as I read on I noticed that you turned it into an interesting peace.
somthing came up but ima finish this,
like i was stating your verse were nie but it indeed had some flaws sertain words or fphrases weren't nessisary, and often had an effet in the flow and you should pratie putting more emotion into your verses nice description of what the jews were experiencing, well done peace.
sonny
not bad, seriously when i seen this i was like wtf/, nooo but then when I read your verse i was shocked it had an structure lol, and the flow wasn't bad wording an little off but good imagery used but you should brush up on your choie of words or wording , and I too think this is your place in keystyles, ok job.
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v/west he presented the peace the best in my opinon.
links in sig..............Do IT!!