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status_unknown
Octane
10 lines
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due in 25 mins
here.
typin my verse
now.
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Ride up in here with a cheap-skape sneer on your face
Run out hiding it because I made you a living disgrace
Never mind getting punched in the face—this dude packs mace
And pulls it out when little girls come up in his place
You try to front live, but you couldn’t survive
Against an old lady with a cane if you had a nine
Some are “trigger happy,” well you’re a “keyboard happy” dude
We all know that you type—we just don’t know why you do
It seems quite ironic, but it's most certainly true
Your avatar fits me perfect—I’m non-stop clowning you
Octane wants to battle me? Must not know I slice frames
Tried to speak through telepathy and only gave himself a migraine
That's because my aim and main purpose is to shatter queers
Blown up so quickly your anatomies scattered in the atmosphere
Legs, arms and head, all of your bodies cavities
Satellites spotted your organs joining up with some of Saturn's rings
Actually, this is good vs. evil and yo... you better bring god
I'll destroy heaven and use angel halos for some ring toss
He hard? Yo.. that really ain't a proper stat for him
Cook you over a fire after I stick you with a javelin.
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uppin #1
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It seems quite ironic, but it's most certainly true
Your avatar fits me perfect—I’m non-stop clowning you
-v-
Octane wants to battle me? Must not know I slice frames
Tried to speak through telepathy and only gave himself a migraine
best line outta whole battle
man octane you need to elevate a bit because your punches are really meh and status you dropped okay punches were meh personals were aiights flow was descent structure was descent and you were just more consistant and that is what help you take this win.
v/status - both hit up battles in sig please honestly please and thankyou
Octane wants to battle me? Must not know I slice frames
Tried to speak through telepathy and only gave himself a migraine
That's because my aim and main purpose is to shatter queers
Blown up so quickly your anatomies scattered in the atmosphere
Legs, arms and head, all of your bodies cavities
Satellites spotted your organs joining up with some of Saturn's rings
vs.
Nothing
V/ SU for more consistant punches and flow was direct and on point...other dude only made statements a d no punches just full of set ups....
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
aight, uppin #2
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This battle was pretty one-sided for Status_unknown.....all of your punches landed effectively....ya drop was worded better...it just seemed you wanted it more..good shit.
Octane nice try but you need harder punches...you had one quotable which seem to be the only bar that hit him.
V = Status for obvious reasons...
Battles I need closed
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OMHOF x1
If I voted in your battle or left feed on your OM plz RTF
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uppin #3
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312701
^Honest vote, thanks
Octane wants to battle me? Must not know I slice frames
Tried to speak through telepathy and only gave himself a migraine
Vs
Nothing much.
Octane your verse wasn't bad but i reckon that though you kept flow and a good visual structure SU had more consistent punches that actually hit you. SU your verse IMO was marginally better than Octanes. Your punches were aight but nothing freshly whoa!...still though you had more consisten punches that hit.
\/ SU.
Kiss me through the camera lens.TNL
Octane wants to battle me? Must not know I slice frames
Tried to speak through telepathy and only gave himself a migraine
best line outta whole battle
vs
nothing appealing to me
SU-you had some good concepts, nicely connected punches, solid flow, basic structure, overall-a fairly good verse, only thing i would tell you to work on is consistancy
Oct-your punches were there, but they needed to be reworded to get that sting, you only hit him really 1 time, so work on your wording
v//SU
hit up my battle with Constance HONESTLY
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