10 lines
Due in 25 Mins.
Blindspit
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Anomalous
Fatal BlacOut
10 lines
Due in 25 Mins.
Blindspit
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Check.
checkity
g/l
This noob sucks at text, he failed in everything else so what is next?
Simple rhyming to him is complex, so he might get a meh on his verse at best
And the way ur going now, you'll never be a champ lyrically so just give it up
Plus you gotta wack name, what the fuck is a Anomalous? but i dont give a fuck
Only time you could be close to a champion is if you bought a Wheaties box
After this battle your life'll be cracked, so don't come to me cuz i don't need these rocks
You'll regret checkin in, because no way you'd ever win ,even spittin in two sets
This kid a queer steppin up to the big leagues, boston red sox, fuck massachusetts
I dont even have to try this kid is a lyrical embarrassment to anywhere he's reppin
2, 4, 6, 8 your the person everyone hates, your not elevating even when ur steppin
Blah Easy 10.
This bitch is a “fruitcup” and overall easy for the taking
I’ll “seed” the man outta you, words will leave you shaken
Who’s your “daddy”? I’ll wipe you out as far as 1000 acres
When I’m done, you’ll be able to say you’ve met your “maker”
This “cat” is whack, I’ll have him choking, gasping and all
Words so thick, rhymes will make him spit out a hairball
Just to show you all that his words are nothing short of whack
10 line verse in 25 minutes will make his head dizzy and attacked
blah….8 lines w/e
uppin #1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312627
hit that
This noob sucks at text, he failed in everything else so what is next?
Simple rhyming to him is complex, so he might get a meh on his verse at best
And the way ur going now, you'll never be a champ lyrically so just give it up
Plus you gotta wack name, what the fuck is a Anomalous? but i dont give a fuck
Only time you could be close to a champion is if you bought a Wheaties box
After this battle your life'll be cracked, so don't come to me cuz i don't need these rocks
You'll regret checkin in, because no way you'd ever win ,even spittin in two sets
This kid a queer steppin up to the big leagues, boston red sox, fuck massachusetts
I dont even have to try this kid is a lyrical embarrassment to anywhere he's reppin
2, 4, 6, 8 your the person everyone hates, your not elevating even when ur steppin
vs.
This bitch is a “fruitcup” and overall easy for the taking
I’ll “seed” the man outta you, words will leave you shaken
Who’s your “daddy”? I’ll wipe you out as far as 1000 acres
When I’m done, you’ll be able to say you’ve met your “maker”
This “cat” is whack, I’ll have him choking, gasping and all
Words so thick, rhymes will make him spit out a hairball
Just to show you all that his words are nothing short of whack
10 line verse in 25 minutes will make his head dizzy and attacke
V/fatal.. cuz he followed the rules
Anom,.... dude read the FL rules there's a 10 line min for every battle man
up 2
uppin # 3 for votes.
i mean uppin 1 wtf lol
hmm well the other kid didn't follow the rues so i'ma give this one to fatal even tho his verse wasn't the best he still dropped how he is supposed to kk both need to find new concepts iight no hate,.,
vote//fatal..
Vote - FatalBlackout
Enjoyed his verse more. And plus Anomalous, your verse was chessy dude. It wasn't that long and it lacked in a lot of category's, which hurt your verse here. Fatal... your verse was more polished and solid. Way better verse. So you get my vote. No hate bruh.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312754
Honest vote^
pz..
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v//Fatal for following the rules, but besides that....
Fatal-you had a decent verse, connected a few punches, had a couple nice concepts, just had a better verse all around
Anom-you lacked in just about everything, i'd say the only aspect you outdid your opponent in, is flow & structure, other than that you didn't bring much to the table, elevate
hit up my battle with Constance HONESTLY
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omg kid you just need to really elevate kid im serious because that of witch you dropped wasn't cool at all your punches were wack as fuck kid and your short one bar and your personals were meak and fatal your verse was more solid need some work with your wording and punches weren't that harsh but ok verse overall
v/fatal
awe dam cuz can you leave an vote on one of my battles in my sig
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