Fuck Your Hate

[The Vortex]

Fuck Your Hate

I grow fast as marijuana under sodium light
Aiming to pass Nirvana - I sense the podium hype
Caught-up in hysteria liars find ways to sway truths
Hate reproduced by bacteria’s plan to decay roots
Suckers stage coups & turn views into FrontPage news
Afraid of the proof exploding like grenades in Beirut
I chew nutrient foods, refusing to lose like Chuck D”
Competition’s strictly choking the chicken, so fuck beef
I speak such heat it’ll scorch your ass like acid on toilet seats
Rap’s so sexy ya’ll boogie like those Pussy Cat freaks
Most hoes aren’t unique, & often perform to a sure norm
Swarms of backbiters leap into the furore of this storm
As war is born contorted in camouflaged uniform
Approach at peril for my final reproach is feral
Check DMX & he’ll tell you “It’s cold on this level”

Ice hardens heartstrings that once strummed beside drumbeats
Wolves clothed as sheep bleat badly hoping I’d become weak
Dumbfounded as these sneaks repeatedly speak tongue-in-cheek
Flung in the deep-end they might even pretend to be friendly
Then when I drop my defence, they use offences to threaten me
Sweating my style while evil smirks a smile obscuring internal dirt
Unsatisfied until my boiling blood is spied pouring into the earth
Turned to curd & third-degree burned amidst a volcanic lava
Rushing my shores scores of kamikazes target my Pearl Harbour

These devious lips spit spears dipped in toxic toad liquids
Causing grievous tongue twists breaking this code of physics
Mathematically you can’t ‘work it out’ since I split digits
Coming too close will cut your damn life short like midgets
To Hell with your usual image of what is off-limits

[The Vortex]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310423
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310252

[Nuccin Futs]

shit man. that was nice.

"To Hell with your usual image of what is off-limits" - that was beautifull. lol. i completely 100% agree with you there. hahahah.

i liked the word placement you had. i also like the very words you had, you've got quite a vocabulary. alot of people do on here, but it feels like they're just spitting together 'big words' that rhyme...your 'big words' rhymed AND made sense.

i think you got a lot of potential man, fer real. keep that shit going. i cant wait to see ur next.

[P. Mortuus]

D0pe....i liked the flow of this and some lines really stood out than others. The one about the foxes as sheeps one was propa good i liked that line and overall the structure visually wasn't great but good and verbally is was very good. The flow rolled of easily and i reckon audiowise this would be very good if you get the right beat na mean.Your Vocabulary as usal was braod and the way you used multies/inners was clever and helped the flow as well. Overall, it was a good piece.

[The Vortex]

yeah for real . thanks for checkin it out. for this is surely a sleepy enviroment nowadays. so yeah i mos def need to get some audio hooked up and reach a larger audience... coz this net ish aint cuttin it.ha



pz
yea

[Amor Jones]

this was real dope vortex. i was feelin yo shit from beginning 2 the end. that marijuana got me drawn in for sum reason and it was just dopeness line after line. nice worplay nice diction n this piece. keep up the good work fam

[Tragedian.]

fuck our hate why ours *sad*....but no seriously good drop....flowed ver nicely....multies we're off the hook lol...vocab was realy good....but your strutre was meh...but fuck strutre noone is gonna care when you makin albums...just a really good drop...rtf on my om if you can...keep up.

[The Vortex]

YEAH FOR REAL. THANX 4 THE LOOKOUT.I dont really fuck w/ structure unles i'm going for a more poetic and like for the paper only piece or i find if i try write to some kind of neat form it hinders the fluency for me in the audio sense


pz

[Engivale]

Vortex, since you write a lot like me and are very concerned with how your pieces come across on the audio side, I love it to begin with. This was really well written so far as the flow went, you were on point and kept coming with a lot of really good punches back to back to back. I haven't peeped in on your stuff in a little while and I think I was a little surprised to see how good you are. This was a really good piece, I was reminded of some of the better stuff on here.

The only qualm is the story was a little strange, I get what you're saying but it comes off as more of a freestyle than a focused narrative. But that was cool. I just like to see stories =D

Good job, my man, Bravo.

[The Vortex]

yeah thanx 4 da look E

yeah was sort of an expression rap. do write sum stories sometimes tho

pz1

[The Vortex]

re - uppin this in the heta of the moment


lol so relevant i think

[Ascend]

The Peal Harbour part Own3d all, plus the 'To hell with your usual image is off limits' part. Hard. I needn't say more.

[NiNjah Red]

The Peal Harbour part Own3d all, plus the 'To hell with your usual image is off limits' part. Hard. I needn't say more.

^word dawg


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[Junio]

i liked this alot. dope flow and content. the first line drew me in, very nice job there.

"These devious lips spit spears dipped in toxic toad liquids
Causing grievous tongue twists breaking this code of physics
Mathematically you can’t ‘work it out’ since I split digits
Coming too close will cut your damn life short like midgets
To Hell with your usual image of what is off-limits "

what a great way to end a great piece.

to hell with your usual image of what is off-limits, i like that, lol.

8/10.

check my new OM... "prison and betrayal"

[Clee]

Ha, very nice read Vortex. I really thought this piece flowed well, I really enjoyed reading this piece, you really started off strong, and then kind of switched your style from more of an open freestyle to a topical kind. Your closing line was very nice, felt it summarized your unique piece.

I chew nutrient foods, refusing to lose like Chuck D”
Competition’s strictly choking the chicken, so fuck beef

haha, I really liked that line the best, this piece was very talented and it was a good read overall Vortex. Look forward to reading more from you. Keep writing.

If you could return the favor.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312848
Thanks.