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Thread: Firey Battle

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    Firey Battle

    This is about a battle between 2 people, read to see wat i mean

    Can see the very essence of a man, when a weapon's in his hand
    How firm's his grip shows the basic premise of his plan
    Envisioned death in his iris from the look in his eye
    Dude's grilling me like, "What, you really looking to die?"
    The tightened clench 'round the handle had clued me in
    My theory is this, his seriousness would soon begin
    A rhyme 'bout his lazy eye made this scrub kid hate me
    Pulling a gat out on stage, he don't care for public safety
    Especially not mine, murder was probably the intent
    Till I decided to breakdown the pyschology of the event
    Beneath the rage lies a hint of hesitation I guess
    Instead of awaiting a battle the crowd's now awaiting my death

    Waving wildly at everyone screaming some sick stuff precise
    the time I was quick to go and pick up the mic
    Discreetly, he didn't see me as I hid it behind my back
    I'm enthused cuz he's confused, it sorta signifies the act
    The strength of my words gave him that screwface in the first place
    I'm controlling his emotions, 'bout to stick him in a worse place
    Spittin' where it hurts, still battling this guy with gats
    In raps I ask, "How you gonna hit me with an eye like that?
    Being critical of your physical, body language looks awfully anguished
    You too smart or too dumb to shoot but end up oftly vanquished"
    Went silent for a moment, allowin him to react to that
    Noticin a vulnerable look, so I'll keep on attackin' that

    "Getting glossy eyed and shaky, check out this punk ass fugazi
    I'd sign you but come on...what have you done for me lately
    Raised such a gangsta rapper, how bad your mother must feel
    Knowing you going to jail for life, trying to show his brothers what's real"
    Sensed his rage start waning, I think logic's taking over
    Wait, he's lowering his gun...seems that all this may be over
    "What's that? You want the mic?" I toss it across to him

    {Crazy Guy Speaks}

    "Wow it's dead quiet in here. For words, I'm at a loss too and
    I want to apologize, I'm really just a coward with heat
    Lyrical rhymed me down to a sour defeat with the power of speech"
    The pen's mightier than the sword, I'm excited it's 'bout done
    And I thought, in this case, the mic's mightier than the gun

    {Done talkin}

    I turn to the crowd in triumph, proud that I got him off me
    (POP)Searing pain, I can't believe it...that mother fucker shot me
    Last edited by Raw Reese; October 9th, 2006 at 06:47 PM

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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311868
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311859

    Also, hit up my battles if ur bored and lookin for somthin to do, vote honestly though

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    Done....Stop sleeping, give feed
    Last edited by Raw Reese; October 9th, 2006 at 07:15 PM

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    nice

    good topic
    everything

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    uh....Any better feed......

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    this was ok

    your strucure was off tho..not bad flow or wordplay...you didnt get really creative with this you were just flowing....no mettas fa real to point out...the topic could have been chozen better
    keep it up..your get better

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