...Me, Overrated...?

[Relli_Mak]

I've lost many things in da world, but never did I lose sense
It's taken a while, but now I accept da room 4 improvement
I'll constantly defend my skills, n take criticism in2 consideration
Hated on by da lyrical community, n still live in a bitter nation
Received many compliments from MC's, it's sumthn I don't demand
Not spittin' 2 accumulate friends, da only 1 I had got banned
A record only means you ran in2 sum 1 w/ less or more skills
Deliver knockout blows 2 my foes, they know how da floor feels
I read many posts, there's not too many that I find wise
I could still 'see' the lack of intelligence in ya'll w/ blind eyes
They continuously mention my couple of losses like it's a new hint
But I've walked all ova MC's lyrically, their attire is my shoe print
Many want chances 2 battle, but I save da best 4 a later date
Cuz I eat MC's up and dispose them, like food served on paper plates
I exhibit da exact vigor lyrically worldwide that thunder created
So, 4 those who say I'm overrated...let's try immensely underrated

[Relli_Mak]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/newr...eply&p=4772286

[Relli_Mak]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/newr...eply&p=4772331

[Relli_Mak]

Uppin 1

[Dirty Nigga]

They continuously mention my couple of losses like it's a new hint
But I've walked all ova MC's lyrically, their attire is my shoe print
^
Thats the best bar in the whole verse..

the rest of the bars were closer to poetry or story telling rather than flowin'..

still a pretty decent drop, son

[Relli_Mak]

Uppin 2

[Relli_Mak]

Uppin 3

[Wyte..]

This was a ok piece. You had good structure and flow. Metaphors were decent in some places and in other places they weren't. I think thyou could have came with some dope wordplay to make this piece even better. You could have also put more creativity and imegry into your lines. Overall this was a decent drop. 6.5/10

[Brandon Heat]

not bad... not bad at all... You aren't overrated though... not by a long shot. flow could be better... alot of rewording goin on... but fuck it... what do I know... I'm overrated.

[Mario Clash]

The first half was mostly boring with lack of content, but from "They continuously mention my couple of losses like it's a new hint" to the end was pretty good but not enought to make you forget about the begining. 7 out of 10

[<Supreme>]

this was an alright drop, and i agree with what you said about records. The best bar in this piece was:
They continuously mention my couple of losses like it's a new hint
But I've walked all ova MC's lyrically, their attire is my shoe print

the rhyming in this piece was good. The (visual and spoken) structure in this drop was good. However, this piece didn't hav a real flow, i felt like this was more of a story-telling piece.

Good drop, keep up

can u eitha hit up a battle, or comment on my new OM (fucking backstabber)

[B.I.Detained.]

CLOSED. Your feedback is old as fuck.