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    lyrical hustla

    -verse1-

    shit im a hustla by injection,not rejection,lyricist at da same perception,
    i bring da pain and deception,wit any weapon,im cletchin,
    n neva shit in da same pot i piss in,
    the trigger of thought is itchin,2 squeeze the ink 2 make an impression,
    im here 2 teach these new kids a lesson,neva rely on a chance u second guessin,
    if u make it out these cold streets take it as a blessin,
    cuz fuckin wit crack heads jus mean u need da rite contraception,
    so whether it b a knife,tek,or an all black smith & wesson,
    watch ya back n ta neva leave home w/o weapons of destruction,
    king of body stretchin,da type 2 practice wut he preachin,
    reachin for dat promise 2 live 4 reason,but niggaz make me look 4 a reason,
    2 leave a carcuss barely breathin,leavin w/o a trace of breachin's,
    hop back in da ride n all they heard were da wheels burnin n screchin//

    -hook-

    wutchu want whoodie cuz i got wut u need,
    whether it b coke,dope,g,or weed,
    if u lookin 4 dat bomb shortie holla at me,
    cuz im a lyrical hustla servin flow wit a evil seed,
    tainted by a hustlaz ambitionz & gangstaz dreams

    -verse2-

    u could hate it or love it,but 1 hit from my crack,u gonna keep comin back cuz u need it,im here 2 feed ur addiction now feed it,
    feel da weed hits,when my vocals rock da drum kits,if u hatin u worse then a dumb bitch,cuz i aint hustlin 4 nuttin nigga i got dreams
    of infinite chips,new whip everyday new chick,cuz im lookin 4 dat everyday new shit,wit each word i spit,its an automatic street hit,
    n 2 da bitch niggaz i get'em done click clacked quick,the chopper is sick,jump off my dick u punk bitch,where im from niggaz move slick,
    "anotha body found in da gutta"is all ya hear when da record skip,but dats how da waterfalls like tlc's classic,i kno it hurts but this kid a bastard,
    the art of war ive mastered,plastered wit weed n beer,i smell da aroma of fear,when hataz pressence is near,n i aint gonna drop no tear,
    when i cock this here,i jus wanna make things clear//its dat dirty jersey,u heard me,i curb g's,disturbed please,hataz deserve shots 2 they knees,
    i cut down sized mc's,put ya soul 2 ease,n leave jus enough breath 4 ya ghost 2 breathe,dat smell is peppa spray n smoke from trees,
    2 intensify effect when ya body weez,jeez u muthafuckaz so touchy,sit down u kno u cant touch me,leave u internally bleed,hi di ho like krayzie
    bone,when i rock the scene,im in it 2 win i fiend da cream,cash rule everything about me,n not 1 of u muthafuckaz gonna stop me,im cocky,
    make u think my gun's latin the way it gets papi(poppy*)

    -pre hook-

    dat im a lyrical hustla,hustla,hustla,
    death when da spark touchin ya,touchin ya
    but im not 1 4 braggin bout bein a gangsta,
    jus watch out when i shoulder lean wanksta

    -hook-

    -verse3-

    u heard dat nigga cash rule everything about me nigga,im cocky,make u think my gun's latin da way it gets papi nigga,
    im down 2 take a chance its yatzee nigga,im raspy,but classy nigga,so when a broad walk past me,well they neva past me,
    so i guess u can call me flosy nigga,i aint kelis but im bosey nigga//expelled 2 writin rhymes,instigatin a crime,cuz i feel da pressure,
    of leavin ya body lumped against ya dresser's implied,dats why i smoke trees,to let the breeze,carry ya screams,2 a new murda scene,
    damn rite i like the attention cuz im givin da game sumtin its much deprived,the spirit of wisdom my lyrics analyze,this rap shit 2 normalize,
    cuz 2 many niggaz wanna ride,but run inside once da bullets fly,every time i rip da mic i feel alive,so i kno inside,ima b puttin it down like
    this til da day i die//who u kno serve flow,wit such a spirted glow,use depression as a means 2 grow,cuz when i get on the mic ya
    impression's froze,like damn i didnt kno so much ice made ya cold,but i do kno when i aim this chopper ya face'll fold//just neva forget me,
    cuz 1 day ill go down wit history,but til then gotta keep my misery company,til 1 of u muthafuckas stop me,let the hook come in
    and kill da memory//

    -pre hook-

    -hook-
    allik war a.k.a. raw killa

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310833

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    ...if u need a third let me kno n ill get it ayt peace tell me wut u think rapbattles!!holla
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    c'mon wit as many peeps that are shown online here sum1 should of said sumtin by now...dont sleep must peep. uppin
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    um you should try and get a better less played subject and less gangsta stuff andyup your vocab stay up keep writting

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    and who do u kno aint makin music dat resembles wut hot 2day...dont front...n up my vocab?u musta read it wrong but thanx 4 da feed
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    don't post your shit if you can't take criticism, your topic was played, you said the same things tons of rappers have already said, it was boring, the structure and flow was fucked to hell, you just need to up your skill, use the critique to improve your writing, don't take it as insults, or you can just leave, but keep writing and hopefully your writings will advance
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    i can b critiqued but name 1 rapper out rite now who dont rhyme bout da same shit? i can give unique but this is 4 my album...
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    the point i was making was you're not going to stand out as a lyricist due to the facts that you're saying the same thing every other rapper has already reiterated 1,000 times and that your vocabulary is mediocre, if you want to make an ok record/mix tape, be my guest, drop the same lines everyone else has, but if you want to stand out as an artist you have to make the shit your own, thats all the more im going to say, take it in and use it or leave it alone, im just trying to help, keep up
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    i kno dat homie trust me i kno.......wait til u hear in audio....i did this mockin da industry...keep up
    allik war a.k.a. raw killa

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    first thing first u need to keep ur readers wantin to read cuz after the first couple of bars i was already bored cuz u are reachin with a topic that is played... plus at times ur flow seemed very forced... im not hatin u jus wanna work on those things... the hook, which is more of a chorus to me, was alright work on that too and like they said u gotta take the criticism cuz u will get alot of it... keep droppin my dude

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    i kno i kno my point is who aint makin it big wit shit like this they do it yall bang sum1 else put it down peeps act like its a hard shoe 2 fill when we all agree subject is played...point bein this a new om 4 me trust me ive been writin since ive done better n doin better since than n im 22 now i think i kno wut im doin only thing im really worried bout is battlin once i ace freestylin ill b unstoppable but usually i jus write songs only recently have i started battlin even still workin on audio tracks but holla back thanx 4 da feed holla
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    ayt there's 38 people who reviewed this post but didnt post anything in reply...dont sleep 5 minutes of ur time aint gonna hurt ur day so leave wut u think peace
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