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Thread: Femme Fatale feat. T.O.N.Y n Insomnia Poetic Alliance Collab

  1. September 24th, 2006, 03:54 PM #1
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    Femme Fatale feat. T.O.N.Y n Insomnia Poetic Alliance Collab

    The Loved
    T.O.N.Y verse


    I had three years under my belt with someone else
    When you came into my life, wouldn't believe how I felt
    Wasn't prepared to throw away everything that I built
    Was decieving someone I love, dealing was ill
    I was committed to another and I never did lie
    To you at least, did want you as thing on the side
    To get by, the night before I got inside
    I asked to know your last name, you seemed surprised
    I could - never forget the priceless look in your eyes
    Who would have thought, that I could be one of those guys
    But from the start, you were mentally and physically fly
    It sparked something in me I just couldn't deny
    I wasn't playing, didn't kick any games to entertain
    Couldn't get intimate, if I ain't know your last name
    And you know there's something there when the night fades away
    And the first thing I did was call the very next day
    Everything happens for a reason they say
    Was it fate? Could it be that your my soulmate?
    Could someone really find true love in such a hard way?
    So I started thinking back, was like Coldplay
    Which brings me to this letter that I'm writing today


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  2. September 24th, 2006, 04:35 PM #2
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  3. September 24th, 2006, 10:06 PM #3
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  4. September 25th, 2006, 07:52 AM #4
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  6. September 25th, 2006, 10:57 PM #6
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    uppin 4 feedback, come on pplz lets get sum feed

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  7. September 26th, 2006, 01:11 AM #7
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  8. September 26th, 2006, 08:32 AM #8
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    okay - here's the breakdown

    T.O.N.Y
    your verse was pretty good - but it wasnt amazing. your lack of multies left me a bit "blahh" but your flow was excellent, and everything stay smooth - a nice lil piece you had there

    Xplict
    your verse was pretty nice - you had great flow, an easy to follow storyline, and a nice range of multies, i think yours was the best out of them all, but thats because you got the same vibe as me, but i dunno - very nice drop, never-the-less.

    Insomnia
    your verse was also good aswell, different from the others, a great sense of style in your flow, real unique, nice mutlies, and awesome flow, nice my man - kudos to you.

    very nice piece here guys, id rate it about 8/10 - keep up the great work!

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  9. September 26th, 2006, 09:26 AM #9
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  10. September 26th, 2006, 08:10 PM #10
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    that shit was hot nice imagery,multies n story from everything nice piece ya'll fo real keep postin....peace
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  11. September 26th, 2006, 11:09 PM #11
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