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Thread: This Year

  1. #1

    This Year

    I spit a crazy flow and I do it so well
    Tryin’ to get high and take my mind off goin’ to Denfeld
    It’s a cool school but class sucks ass
    Time inside slow as fuck but the year goes by so fast
    This year will be the shit cause I’m a senior
    And my 89’ coupe has never seemed cleaner
    But I work my ass off just so I can gas it up
    When weed comes my way I can never pass it up
    Fuck a job selling green is so much better
    I’ve done it and its easy not to mention the cheddar
    Got people young and old callin’ my phone
    Some looking for a dub others tryin’ to buy a zone
    Sell a few bags and start to count up the loot
    I’m smoking weed for free and makin’ money to boot
    One day look in the mirror in my eyes and realize
    That it ain’t worth gettin’ busted and my plan was not idealized
    Why throw my life away when I’ve got a future ahead
    I’d rather just blaze blunts and fuck up my head instead
    Just messin’ wit you weed don’t do that to me
    And I never got a grade lower than a B
    That’s right I’m a stoner but still make the honor roll
    Plus I’ll handle any situation and always take control
    Never pull a stoner, or get confused
    Only try to make people think but still amused
    With my crazy flows that most cant comprehend
    Most people only hear the word at the end
    Of the rhyme but please listen to every word I say
    But if you cant keep up, don’t worry its ok
    Not everyone can spit a rhyme or flow
    Maybe I’ll stop talkin’ fast and take my next rhyme slow
    Take a ride in my caddy
    I’m a hoe’s sugar daddy
    Behind the wheel I might look like a P.I.M.P.
    I do it on purpose to make a hoe come see me
    Because I’ve got no game that I can spit
    Ill just pimp a hoe and pull some snoop dogg shit
    And ask how many hoes in your motha fuckin’ crew
    Wanna take a ride in my 89’ coupe
    All the girlies raise their hands and I hope I pick them
    Cause I spit the hottest shit heard since eminem


    (Denfeld is my school)
    beat-Master-P I Need Dubs

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    I usually do more indepth replies...but you need work on better rhymes...you had kinda simplistic shit to be honest.....rhyming 'spit' and 'shit'...'caddy' and 'daddy'...hopefully it was just a keystyle and some people call it...either way...if your going to take the time to actually post an OM you need to at least take into consideration the fact you want a real topic that people will enjoy reading...not to mention....I dont listen to Master P...therefore I have no clue what beat your talking about at the end...

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    Need 2 links to pieces where you left good feedback
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