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Voting Will End Late Sun.
Regular Rules, Vote on 3 battles
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Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
check 14 lines:
Dude, take your verse and bin it coz there's not a decent punch in it
And here's me thinking you not having a rap name was a gimic
But now you're making a buzz, you're creating a stir cuz
..I already had three guys pm'ing me.. telling me how bad your verse was
So you dropped early and lively now I can keep my diary tidy
I mean who wants to find out they've got the week off.. on a Friday?
So to be fair, you came bold.. but you were always meant to fold
Coz I allready shrugged off TB when I was eight years old
I'll rip this bitch then the shit starts, Tonys leaving with a ripped heart
Coz we all know Quentin Tarantino only gave Mr. Brown a bit part..
So I'll drop cliche's and nameplays, coz bitch I'm done bluffin
How can I spit a personal on someone who hasnt done nuthin?
Ya runs stunted allready, bitch stay away from my ruckus
Coz you'll get on my nerves..that run inbetween my knuckles
So who the fuck is Tony Brown? this faggotry's got me riled up
You gave this site a bad name, on the user list when you signed up
And now its time to move forwards, bitch we're laughing at your words
Couldn't think of a decent closer so I edited my shit above your verse
Last edited by Erupt; September 6th, 2006 at 06:28 PM
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well damn lol
check n yea 14's good
sorry i went 18 instead, just couldn't help it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=97461
Fuck this overrated piece of shit.....
Sure he decent n all but can't elevate, he still ain't great yet
But how can u evolve, havin such trouble wit that washed up vet
U really needa concentrate, he a snake so of course he's rattled
Cant keep his head on straight, ima leave it crooked after this battle
See he constantly playin games, but u know this ain't no monopoly
Id wave the voters in ur direction, but that'd take a fuckin tsunami
This nigga hopin for luck, cuz his love life sucks, he gettin tortured
Only girls u fuck<---eventually give u those 2 words in reverse order
I'll be surprised if u post early, you got the worst timing ever
I know he'll make the deadline tho, dem old punches CANT live forever
Shiiit...
I got kids shakin they hips, here's some advice better take it bitch
Just cuz u use words wit double-meanings, DOESNT make it a diss
Me? i'm known to spit sickness, u won't get anywhere wit this text shit
If he ever made it on big time tv, Comcast would go outta business
Mayne this dude ain't even witty, fact is he can barely even rap
This whore's gay, peep the siggy, i should win just becuz of that
See now, i've lost the bit of respect i ever had for this fake writer
I never seen one SO hyped n excited over gettin mentioned....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&page=2&pp=15
.......by a biter
i win, now go fuck yourself
I edited my verse into my check in
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iight g' luck mayne
just an extra post so ppl see we both posted
vote/com
seriously, i'm gonna start a petition for Tony Brown to get kicked out of LLL, the wave line, i been sein since like, a year ago, the fuck u u fuck wordplay, WHAT THE FUCK, like i said in the last mag, this dude has no ideas for punches, a comcast line and a deadline line..
wow.
com had his opener, the TB line, the personal line which i know is used a lot but for Tony Brown it's that much more effective and true, and that nerve line
Vote COM, and Vote, Tony Brown out of LLL, i swear man he';s worse than nightmare.
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Dude, take your verse and bin it coz there's not a decent punch in it
And here's me thinking you not having a rap name was a gimic
^^Ok^^
But now you're making a buzz, you're creating a stir cuz
..I already had three guys pm'ing me.. telling me how bad your verse was
^^Lolz cool^^
So you dropped early and lively now I can keep my diary tidy
I mean who wants to find out they've got the week off.. on a Friday?
^^Lol^^
So to be fair, you came bold.. but you were always meant to fold
Coz I allready shrugged off TB when I was eight years old
^^Nah playeded on him^^
I'll rip this bitch then the shit starts, Tonys leaving with a ripped heart
Coz we all know Quentin Tarantino only gave Mr. Brown a bit part..
^^Lol decent^^
So I'll drop cliche's and nameplays, coz bitch I'm done bluffin
How can I spit a personal on someone who hasnt done nuthin?
^^Nah^^
Ya runs stunted allready, bitch stay away from my ruckus
Coz you'll get on my nerves..that run inbetween my knuckles
^^Cool^^
So who the fuck is Tony Brown? this faggotry's got me riled up
You gave this site a bad name, on the user list when you signed up
^^Lmao^^
And now its time to move forwards, bitch we're laughing at your words
Couldn't think of a decent closer so I edited my shit above your verse
^^Nah^^
Vs.
Sure he decent n all but can't elevate, he still ain't great yet
But how can u evolve, havin such trouble wit that washed up vet
^^Nope^^
U really needa concentrate, he a snake so of course he's rattled
Cant keep his head on straight, ima leave it crooked after this battle
^^Nah aint feelin it^^
See he constantly playin games, but u know this ain't no monopoly
Id wave the voters in ur direction, but that'd take a fuckin tsunami
^^Monopoly and tsunami rhyme??? pretty weak anyway^^
This nigga hopin for luck, cuz his love life sucks, he gettin tortured
Only girls u fuck<---eventually give u those 2 words in reverse order
^^Nah weak^^
I'll be surprised if u post early, you got the worst timing ever
I know he'll make the deadline tho, dem old punches CANT live forever
^^Ok i guess^^
I got kids shakin they hips, here's some advice better take it bitch
Just cuz u use words wit double-meanings, DOESNT make it a diss
^^Aite^^
Me? i'm known to spit sickness, u won't get anywhere wit this text shit
If he ever made it on big time tv, Comcast would go outta business
^^Nar^^
Mayne this dude ain't even witty, fact is he can barely even rap
This whore's gay, peep the siggy, i should win just becuz of that
^^Again this was pretty weak^^
See now, i've lost the bit of respect i ever had for this fake writer
I never seen one SO hyped n excited over gettin mentioned....
^^Lol^^
Vote/COM
He had a few decent lines in his verse, nothing amazing but it was easily enough to beat tony who didnt really have anything i liked...
Hit mine plz
ok Marv seriously, just don't vote on my battles anymore
u vote first n sway every fuckin one of your dick riders
fuck outta here
Originally Posted by AZNCY00T33.
agreed
and v/ COM for that nerve line alone
Vote Com...
Tony was horrible.. and not because he mentioned me (i mean come on.. its a common occurrence these days.. lol) Com's verse was just that much better. Had a few witty lines. Battle wasnt even close.
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
COM:
Dude, take your verse and bin it coz there's not a decent punch in it
And here's me thinking you not having a rap name was a gimic
Looool
Ya runs stunted allready, bitch stay away from my ruckus
Coz you'll get on my nerves..that run inbetween my knuckles
Just nice..
Tony Brown:
Sure he decent n all but can't elevate, he still ain't great yet
But how can u evolve, havin such trouble wit that washed up vet
Nice idea.. but just didn't hit that hard.
Overall:
COM had a few nice punches, and just consistently threw jabs here and there. Looked like TB tried too hard.. had a few washed up concepts, and didn't quite make the impact he wanted. COM just takes it easily. Props to both.
Vote: COM.
Check Brix Vs Untold out :-)
ArtificialIntelligence
Sacred Scriptures Champ: 2006.....Brixton
Sure he decent n all but can't elevate, he still ain't great yet
But how can u evolve, havin such trouble wit that washed up vet
played
U really needa concentrate, he a snake so of course he's rattled
Cant keep his head on straight, ima leave it crooked after this battle
nahz
See he constantly playin games, but u know this ain't no monopoly
Id wave the voters in ur direction, but that'd take a fuckin tsunami
no
This nigga hopin for luck, cuz his love life sucks, he gettin tortured
Only girls u fuck<---eventually give u those 2 words in reverse order
ok
I'll be surprised if u post early, you got the worst timing ever
I know he'll make the deadline tho, dem old punches CANT live forever
played
I got kids shakin they hips, here's some advice better take it bitch
Just cuz u use words wit double-meanings, DOESNT make it a diss
feeding, not that good
Me? i'm known to spit sickness, u won't get anywhere wit this text shit
If he ever made it on big time tv, Comcast would go outta business
nah
Mayne this dude ain't even witty, fact is he can barely even rap
This whore's gay, peep the siggy, i should win just becuz of that
homophobe? No
See now, i've lost the bit of respect i ever had for this fake writer
I never seen one SO hyped n excited over gettin mentioned....
by a biter
nahz
rap name line i accidently cut out an dont feel like pastin again
ok
But now you're making a buzz, you're creating a stir cuz
..I already had three guys pm'ing me.. telling me how bad your verse was
ehr good i guess
So you dropped early and lively now I can keep my diary tidy
I mean who wants to find out they've got the week off.. on a Friday?
ok
So to be fair, you came bold.. but you were always meant to fold
Coz I allready shrugged off TB when I was eight years old
nope
LMAOZ
So I'll drop cliche's and nameplays, coz bitch I'm done bluffin
How can I spit a personal on someone who hasnt done nuthin?
played since ever
Ya runs stunted allready, bitch stay away from my ruckus
Coz you'll get on my nerves..that run inbetween my knuckles
dope
So who the fuck is Tony Brown? this faggotry's got me riled up
You gave this site a bad name, on the user list when you signed up
predictable. decent
And now its time to move forwards, bitch we're laughing at your words
Couldn't think of a decent closer so I edited my shit above your verse
yretyetgblah
This nigga hopin for luck, cuz his love life sucks, he gettin tortured
Only girls u fuck<---eventually give u those 2 words in reverse order
vs
coms opener... that i cut instead of pasted
I'll rip this bitch then the shit starts, Tonys leaving with a ripped heart
Coz we all know Quentin Tarantino only gave Mr. Brown a bit part..
LMFAO^
Ya runs stunted allready, bitch stay away from my ruckus
Coz you'll get on my nerves..that run inbetween my knuckles
vote com
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Sure he decent n all but can't elevate, he still ain't great yet
But how can u evolve, havin such trouble wit that washed up vet
cool
U really needa concentrate, he a snake so of course he's rattled
Cant keep his head on straight, ima leave it crooked after this battle
Played punch
See he constantly playin games, but u know this ain't no monopoly
Id wave the voters in ur direction, but that'd take a fuckin tsunami
lol cool
This nigga hopin for luck, cuz his love life sucks, he gettin tortured
Only girls u fuck<---eventually give u those 2 words in reverse order
cool
I'll be surprised if u post early, you got the worst timing ever
I know he'll make the deadline tho, dem old punches CANT live forever
ok
Shiiit...
I got kids shakin they hips, here's some advice better take it bitch
Just cuz u use words wit double-meanings, DOESNT make it a diss
nah weak
Me? i'm known to spit sickness, u won't get anywhere wit this text shit
If he ever made it on big time tv, Comcast would go outta business
weak
Mayne this dude ain't even witty, fact is he can barely even rap
This whore's gay, peep the siggy, i should win just becuz of that
wtf weak
See now, i've lost the bit of respect i ever had for this fake writer
I never seen one SO hyped n excited over gettin mentioned....
by a biter
Statement
vs
Dude, take your verse and bin it coz there's not a decent punch in it
And here's me thinking you not having a rap name was a gimic
nah not feeling
But now you're making a buzz, you're creating a stir cuz
..I already had three guys pm'ing me.. telling me how bad your verse was
lol cool
So you dropped early and lively now I can keep my diary tidy
I mean who wants to find out they've got the week off.. on a Friday?
meh kinda weak
So to be fair, you came bold.. but you were always meant to fold
Coz I allready shrugged off TB when I was eight years old
lol cool punch
I'll rip this bitch then the shit starts, Tonys leaving with a ripped heart
Coz we all know Quentin Tarantino only gave Mr. Brown a bit part..
cool
So I'll drop cliche's and nameplays, coz bitch I'm done bluffin
How can I spit a personal on someone who hasnt done nuthin?
played punch
Ya runs stunted allready, bitch stay away from my ruckus
Coz you'll get on my nerves..that run inbetween my knuckles
rofl great punch
So who the fuck is Tony Brown? this faggotry's got me riled up
You gave this site a bad name, on the user list when you signed up
rofl cool
And now its time to move forwards, bitch we're laughing at your words
Couldn't think of a decent closer so I edited my shit above your verse
roflmao
v-COM
Tony - weak verse ..wtf @ a comcast line? you've done so much better, and it just seems you're on this slump for witty and fresh lines lately. your going to have to get your head in the game man ..you can do it. the evolve line was really the only one i kind've liked.
Com - an average verse coming from you. which is better than most people in general really ..being that you're com and judging by the comment from tony in his check in he was a bit intimidated and completely discouraged he'd win. so that had its advantages too i guess. that shrugged off TB line was priceless lol ..solid verse ..enough to win.
v. COM, for reasons well known.
- Cry
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