treach p vs mc pat

[MC Pat]

10 lines, i dont know anyone on this sight so it would be nice if people would actually vote fair and you dont just get your friends to vote for you.

[Forlorn]

NAH dont worry it dosnt work like that you spit first
Spit in the next 20 mins and i will follow
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[MC Pat]

fuck this kid, i have no respect for Treach-P
doest this bitch know i break the necks of those who test-me?
you need to take a rest-G, or else ill just put your life to rest
cuz your record dont impress me, ill battle rap you with this text
cuz i aint no fuckin computer geek, im a real battle rapper
your raps dont just stink, they reek...now watch me as i capture
all the votes for this battle, cuz your reputation dont precede you
your boyfriend just called, he said hes horny and he needs you
you make me sick, bitch suck my dick, right quick--no hesitation
now watch me choke you with my shit, death by penial effixiation
give you the sensation, of a man so close to death
you scared of termination, cuz i battle till my last breath
so listen treach, while i sing the fuckin chorus
your such a pussy, your new rap name's mc clitorious.

[Forlorn]

If 'Youre battlin till youre last breath than you sure have had a short 'carreer',/
Because when i read that to my dad even he was haven a 'sneer'/
Because i tested you like you said and you came up 'negative'/
The fact that you could even come close to winnin a battle is 'imagineative'/
IF i really had a 'boyfriend' than what would he be doin ringin up your 'house'/
I think you got it mixed up 'honey'(lol) because i was never into that 'fetish ' - spouse/
You playin wit 'wurdz' you dont no the 'meanin'/
Its allright to have a male friend but not inyour 'meanin'/
No offense or anything but none of that came close to 'ryming'/
Dead already only been here 2 days, now not 'tyming'/

THE FINAL BLOW
I have been searching all day for a rapper wacker than "MC PAT" BUT NONE WAS found,
I leave ya charred bleeding chorpse in a "MOund"

I wasnt really tryin but still took this hah ah ah

[Orikle]

Ohhh k, Pats verse was oh k, it flowed well but there were no real punches at all...Most of it you were just talking yourself up and not focusing on punching oin Treach...Treaches verse was not bad...I think he took this by just coming harder with punches but try not to feed off others verse, that was the only flaw I could see in it...This line was nice though....

If 'Youre battlin till youre last breath than you sure have had a short 'carreer',/

^^That was Pretty Nice^^

Both of you keep at it and elevate.....

Vote=Treach

[Forlorn]

uPPin for some votes on this shit
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[Feminem]

trench p got that no bother........gd i liked the bit bout ur dad sneerin lolollol.......................................... ...........

[tRiLL]

treach got this...pat just needs to evliate

not bad for a newbie.............treach just came harder

VOTE TREACH

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[Forlorn]

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[Forlorn]

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[Forlorn]

uppin 4 some votes............................................/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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[Forlorn]

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[Forlorn]

uppin for some votes this shit gettin hella slept n i just wanna end it now come onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnn
i will return all votessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss on yall battles

[Forlorn]

uppin 4 some more votes comeonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnju st wanna get this finisheddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

[E-SYDE THUG]

treach u got my vote u ripped him
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.......................holla back....E-Syde