^last up for the night.
^last up for the night.
lol idc what everyone else said i thought this piece was quiet nice i liked the fact that you didnt force anyones name here every name you used had a meaning and fit into the line and although this piece had no particualar storyline or meaning i enjoyed reading it you shoulda used my name
plz rtf on "The Siren's Deception"
^Damn them 2 lines were dope as fuckPissed at lies but I’m a lawyer so I’ll back the Client
Clients defiant so he flows on the Omega wave reliant
But cool piece liked how you incorporated all the names. Keep it real in college nicca. Get at me
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IJL
I'll check the links later on in the day na mean.^
well nice....not much to say just thanks for mentioning my name(omega.) though it was short but nice very creative aswell....take care
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
We don't need Jehovah, Witness will get to ya headdopeThe only Witness was the one who saw Da King’s
punch Blitzand dope at mentioning my old name too lol
nice peice dude, it was simplistic, but it had the desired effect, definitely not one of your better peices, but perhaps one of the peices you will be remembered by, not because of how you wrote it, but because of why your wrote it if you know what I mean. I enjoyed the read, as I usually do when I read a Pakaveli OM lol. I'm sad to see you go mate, but yea, do what you gotta do and then get you ass back here
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is this a cry for more feedback on future pieces? You're awful good with the politics, Pak. LoL.
This was cool, thx for pluggin' me in somewhere, I'm sure most of us read this waiting for our names to pop up. Cool read, this was just funky and cool, man.
You MUST HAVE been on at least a light depressant here - weed, alcohol, maybe a zannie? Go for it, man. I won't judge ya.
LoL. (I don't approve of drug use, officially. It's bad for you. Just let me do them.)
A.I.
"She managed to extract from the restriction itself a further delicate thought, like good poets whom the tyranny of rhyme forces into the discovery of their finest lines."
yeah bro nice write. thamx for the hoLL@. hah. flow was on.ill havta read this agin later. coz you got some good form and flow on here for REAL
if you get time check this madness
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=308739
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Thanks for the shoutout lol.
And word. be back soon mother fucker.
AI
“¡Viva la Revolución!”
this was cool i could see this being an intro or outro track on a album the topic was creative and interesting with all the shout outs you seemed to incorparate a bunch of members into your writing like you said it wasent an outstanding peice but it was defently a good read i enjoyed it the flow was perfect for it and i like how you kinda went in and out of rhyme schemes so nice job although it was fairly long it was worth the read
leave feed on the om in my sig
hit up these om's wit some feed
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mayne...im in this om...w00t
ok now
i like how u used niggas names and mad it make sense like this
When the depressor gets to your head get a Komic Relief
that smart and to do a whole om like that i think would be very dificult...so kudos on that...u stil had nice vocab...and to do the name thing made the wordplay outragious...u continue to make dope oms...this isnt like ur other ones...but the topic fits the verse right...and u added a personal idea for every person..like talkin about there humor or that theyve been gone or there skill leval...smart...
Don’t talk about guns or the GrimReapa might appear
^w00tnice om...
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