Easy as 1.2.3.

[LedgenZ]

i invent a verse composed of uncommon integers that reach to infinity
divide the universe by Pi to expose it's symmetry
broken down into fractals of chaotic imagery
slowly unraveling the architecture of divinity
use archaic wisdom - to break life down to an algebraic system
plot the parabolas of existence so there is no way to twist em
calculate a verse so precise you divide your faction to fractions when you hear em
work the angles courtesy of Pythagorean Theorem
code travels the matrix i study to spot the motions
add the common factors on an abacus and plot the quotients
i douse the rhythm with a thousand algorithms as curricula
discover that the globe and sun are perpendicular
my particular brand of mic geometry is rockin proofs
to show i equal both sides of you squared like the hypoteneuse
then i'll crack the code of a semiotic symbiote trapped in the mode
of the math behold as I fold it in half collapse to a fraction or decimal
yet still increasing to epochal decibels of inestimable
value - Now you see an object somewhat elliptical flipped reciprocal
reaches critical mass with a pass of the volume in cyclical
motion stirring a potion ingredients: quotients and medians
and the means to an end seems to begin in the range of strange attractors
flying on Cartesian planes with factors in an alternate path backwards
subtracted along an axis of y or x even cyber techs can’t find the next
integer hidden in the circumference amongst this hyper text
find the sine and tangent of a mind that’s rampantly spouting this
calculate the calculus of an amalgamated alchemist
it amounts to this static relation to quadratic equations
add in the radius of Saturn’s duration to fatten summations
try penning your bilinear stats to a grid or a graph
but perhaps consider forgetting the Euclidean path and inventing the math
intersect the vocal chords with words and plot the secants
as the events unfold and spot the sheet inside a Fibinachi sequence
look you can add rhymes for milleniums but still ya sum is none
in other words, welcome to Microphone Mathematics 101

[Marvman]

what a load of nerdy croc shit. never return to this section of RB EVER.

[Dunkalicious]

Yeah lol i have never commented on a open mic but lolz man. This is mad gay. Theres a fine line between dope vocab and being a completely nerdy retard and you achieved the latter and some.

i douse the rhythm with a thousand algorithms as curricula
discover that the globe and sun are perpendicular
find the sine and tangent of a mind that’s rampantly spouting this
calculate the calculus of an amalgamated alchemist

^wowww

[LedgenZ]

^hmmmmmm.... i just read your last rap dawg......you kinda suck, but thanx anyway.

[Laureate]

2 Links man....and dont listen to the dumbfucks above, if Bounce or someone had dropped this, it would have been seen as dope

[Dunkalicious]

^Lol at that. Thats the weakest shit ever..Oh if bounce dropped it i would say it was cool... First of all bounce wouldnt drop this gayness and secondly stfu. Im giving him feedback. Negative feedback, because its a fucking horrible piece. And lol my last battle was against passive who was in second coming at the time and i merked him. Stfu fool, you dont no shit. What i want you to do is define all of those words for me



Stop posting useless garbage...you gave no feed, telling someone that their drop sucked is not feed moron
-Laur

[SMZ]

he used his words correctly

for using all that math terminology in a piece with some pretty coo rhythm and schemes it's kinda dope

but for basically saying nothing and once again using all that math terminology it's kinda gay

lol - coo piece - definantly what you'd call nerd rap - if I was into nerd rap I'd say this was dope.... as is, it's out of my comfort zone

[Tragedian.]

im not gonna lie...i actually do like this drop....very creative even tho i cant understand half the words you used...but i must say it was fuckin dope..i have never seen a drop like this in om yet...deffintly shit that should be HOF if good nuff...flow was nice barely fell off...mulites were there some where within those big fuckin words lol...some lines were strecthed as fuck...but meh what can i say bout that...strutre was the only real bad thing...but once again thats cuz of the words you used....the title didnt really catch my eye lol...but nice shit and u need 2 links...one of them could be my new om Drama..keep up peace...

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

ayo, i was lost in this shit, so all i can say is a little

the flow was nice, structure could've been better, to make it perfect you could've, made the flow better, had the structure more in sink, and used words that werent so fuckin big, cuz i got lost in the shit, but not a bad peice, i see A's on ur report card....LOl, stay up and stay at it

[Moniker]

What i want you to do is define all of those words for me

Do it your damn self. Cats is too lazy nowadays to read anything remotely educational. Ledge, this was a sweet piece. Like college graduate braggadocio bro. I can somewhat agree with SMZ since the content wasn't insanely deep or emotional, but that doesn't matter here. It's tight to see a drop put together the way you strung in all the mathematical terms as metaphors of emcee shit. Nicely done. Don't listen to the ignorance.

[LedgenZ]

Ight here we go.


First off my comment wasn’t aimed at you, it was actually aimed at the stupid mother fucker in front of you. Second of all that load of bullshit you posted had absolutely nothing to do with feedback what so ever. There’s a big difference between constructive criticism and being and absolute asshole. But hey I do apologize if my particular brand of lyrical intellect made you feel inferior in anyway. I do realize some of you are absolute idiots and have yet to explore the English language beyond the shadows of the four letter words. So look I’m going to do you a favor and help you help yourself - so instead of me defining these words how about you go and grab a dictionary and find out what the fuck they mean on your own.


oh yeah this is aimed at the drunk whatever is name is.

[Black Lizzard]

I have never heared of nerd rap before, haha at nerd rap, the fuck? But nahh I liked this piece the vocabulary was really great, all the algebra and geometric metaphores were great and you put it together nicely. It flowed really well and made a whole lot of sense but just didn't really have anything emotional that made me feel like you enjoyed writing this. The fuckin metaphores were dope as hell and it was extremely original but it felt like as if you didn't care about this. Other than the lack of emotion, everything was great and I liked it a lot.

[Dunkalicious]

I understand what everything means. Wanted him to define all the words himself to show us he does.

All this says is " im guna <add algebraic or other math terminology here>" the whole time. Then just forces a whole alot of rhyming, and doesnt actually achieve anything. What are you trying to say? A whole bunch of highschool maths proofs and theories..smh i cant really see how anyone can like this. If Dj is right and these sorta concepts can get HOF then lol at the state of this forum.

Btw if you dont consider " this piece is horrible" as feedback then i suggest YOU pick up a dictionary and look it up. Tool.

Edit: As Ha just alluded to below. Anyone could right this..The way you're talking is as if you are a creative genius who created these terms. A 14 year old learns 80% of that stuff in highschool. You're just applying mathetical terms to real life things..its not hard cunt.

So yes my feedback is: That was a horrible concept, fucking boring with absolutely no imagery and emotion. Try harded vocab which people can understand but just cant relate to.

[BootyLover]

lol, anyone could write this kind of thing.

I lay the foundation and devide the angles equally like isosceles

[Marvman]

it's all good knowing they're all maths terminology but when we can't even define the words you're using, what's the fucking point of posting that shit.

you owe me bitch.