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  1. #1
    Genetikz
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    Start....Pain...End

    this shit is an angry pease, enjoy this drop,,....... dedicated to ma new crew......


    yo let me introduce maself, ima a baby, i think maby//
    im in a bag of water//
    the woman carrying me hopes im a daughter, but im puttin them hopes to the slaughter//
    u see im a boy look i got a toy, so i must be a boy//
    im trapped in here, feelin da fear of the outside of ma mums hide//
    i can feel ma time is near to maikn that slide//
    wish i could stay here n hide inside//
    shit ma time is here, its finally time to face ma growing fear//
    look the placenta is opanin, shit i cant hang on to ma felopian tube//
    only hope i got is to suck on a boob to got some more food//
    that fuckin placenta, look its got a hole in da center//
    here i go nice n slow, bet mums hopin i go wide her flow//
    come out nice n easy from her hole down below//
    last thing i hear before i go face ma biggest fear//
    "dont forget to breath when you leave"//

    **chorus**

    you cant choose who n where your born too//
    wish you could, i understand//
    my only crime is breathin//
    thats why im uppin n leavin//
    u better be beleivin//

    Wo its bright out here//
    look at all those people standin n learin at me//
    fuck i need a pee!, oh wo here it comes//
    hey look people im like a fountain//
    jesus look at those boobs, their like mountains//
    i bet they spit food like fountains//
    "its a boy look he has a toy"//
    but hold up!, where you takin me?//
    whats she say?, ma mom whanted a girl, ima a boy so i gotta go!//
    IM A NEW BABY! DONT HATE ME LOVE ME! PLEASEEE//
    fuck i think their gunna sell me on EBAY!//
    NO WAY, HOW COULD SHE DO THIS!! I WANNA BE LOVED//
    I WANNA BE CUDDLED AND SPOILED, WHY THE FUCK IS SHE BOILIN ME!//
    this lady is really startin to annoy me, im only a boy//
    you should be filled wid joy! LOVE ME PLEASEEEEEEEE!!//

    **CHORUS**

    you cant choose who n where your born too//
    wish you could, i understand//
    my only crime is breathin//
    thats why im uppin n leavin//
    u better be beleivin//

    10 years later people avoid me like im darth vader//
    im into all sorts of shit, mu butt gets liked each and every day//
    i aint making no fucking head- way, im abandoned in a home all alone//
    noone to phone, im so alone, i only eats whats left on the bone//
    nobody loves me, im all bitter n twisted, fuckin life aint shit, i can list it//
    born given up, sent to foster parents, novalty where's off, given up//
    sent to a home, fed nothin but a bone, where the fuck is ma home//
    "WHY DOESENT MA MUM PHONE", fucking cry every day, no hope all alone//
    look in da mirror, nothin but skin n bone!, im so fuckin alone//
    why cant i have some one to cry to, even fucking lie to, this aint fair//
    i shouldent have this, why have i missed life, am i so bad//
    this life of mine is driving me mad, ITS SO FUCKIN SAD!//

    **choris**

    you cant choose who n where your born too//
    wish you could, i understand//
    my only crime is breathin//
    thats why im uppin n leavin//
    u better be beleivin//

    10 years later, im still darth vader//
    only now im stronger n wiser, harder n rougher//
    im ma own fuckin buffer i dont need anybody, their a fuckin hinderunce//
    ma life is indurance, like a race to see who kills me first//
    i got no contreol, ma race is with god, see who takes ma life first//
    each and every corner im taking it further, robbery, car theft//
    fuckit ma bitch left, who gives a fuck, go on go, why you lookin like dat//
    get the fuck outta me life, u aint never gunna be ma wife, im endin ma life//
    walk in da kitchen, pick up the biggest knife, stick it in ma coat//
    go to ma crew, say whatch this homies, ima about to get a reason to gloat//
    see a policeman, call him over, he gets out of his MG rover//
    SCREAM AT HIM FUCK YOU BASTARD, stick dat knife down his throat//
    stand n stair move i dont dare, i gone to way to far//
    look at ma homies runin far, shit what can i do?//
    i cant goto prison, i cant run, cant talk' no one listens//
    I GOT AN IDEA, ima win ma race, end ma life with haste//
    cant stand the horrible taste in ma mouth, fuckit im headin south//
    drive to the cliff, smokin one last spliff, gotta go now//
    aint a question of how, i no right here, right now, im takin ma final bow//
    walk to the edge, im still all alone, nowhere to call home, no1 to run to//
    look down, ma face dont even break into a frown, give ma bitch clown of a mutha 1 last chance//
    she still dont call, so i dive n begin to fall, faster n faster, wind rushin past ma ears//
    i aint got no internal fears, i no noone is sheddin a tear, proberly still learin//
    so ma life is nearin an end, i got one last message to send//
    to ma mutha, after all this please tell her i still love her//
    tell her im above her, all i whant is her love for me//
    tell her not to worry, im goin home to the almighty, ima be alrighty//
    lights go out, ma head emptys, i got just one feelin.............//
    finally i got a place thats home, im no longer all alone...................

    **chorus**

    you cant choose who n where your born too//
    wish you could, i understand//
    my only crime is breathin//
    thats why im uppin n leavin//
    u better be beleivin//


    my life i give to you, ma heart i give to you, my soul i give to you//
    please just love me like i love you, im home.................

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    that was tight
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  3. #3
    Genetikz
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    uppin dis

  4. #4
    B(V)U$3
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    not really my kind of style
    but i can see where your going
    you have some pretty good rhymes but over all its still pretty elementry. i think you just need to be a little more clever
    i would expect someone to use the rhymes you chose
    i think inorder to elevate you have to throw stuff people wouldnt expect
    i still liked it
    nothing but respect
    just keep flowing
    and keep reading

    peace
    man

    -B
    Last edited by B(V)U$3; June 6th, 2003 at 10:32 PM

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    It was an aight drop , some of ur lines werent Rhyming , , I kno u can do better than This......tha 2nd verse was weak...I wasnt feelin it at all..Tha last verse was Aight...

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