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Thread: 7 Days War

  1. #1
    Reno Starr
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    7 Days War

    This is my first song with a chours and all, dont sleep on this one hit me up with what ya think of it, i did it in about 20 mins or so.

    The Seven days war cant go on anymore |
    We gotta shove the past out the door |
    So many dead bodies on the floor |
    The Seven days war cant go on anymore |

    The guns where lifted high, the month was July |
    The day was the sixth when the war cry, was heard in the sky |
    They seemed to be fighting for no reason, a simple treason of the heart |
    A different view of the same review was tearing the two apart |
    One side was white, ready to put up on hell of fight |
    The other black, tired of getting dragged out into the night |
    Why couldn't they get along? Who has the right to say who should belong? |
    I stand on the white side, hands at my side not on the fight, I take a walk along |
    The middle where the war is a stand still, getting a slight cold chill |
    A single white person yelling a degrading word, skin crawling in me like he king of the hill |

    The Seven days war cant go on anymore |
    We gotta shove the past out the door |
    So many dead bodies on the floor |
    The Seven days war cant go on anymore |

    I turn to my side, torn and worn pride a deep sigh for them |
    I look to the other, a child sits his eyes a glisten like a gem |
    He cries, as he tries to find out what the hating is for |
    I frown and move to him, his tears continue to pour |
    He don't want this 7 Days War to go on anymore |
    A gun shot was heard, what occurred next was a sad time |
    The boy was hit like a bird, a third one dead during this hellish crime |
    I dropped down, a frown on my face, was the white race really such a disgrace? |
    That they would add a little boy to the list of the slain? If I could I would replace |
    My life for his own, I tried to stand but there was this pain in my bone |
    I can only picture this kids family sitting alone |

    The Seven days war cant go on anymore |
    We gotta shove the past out the door |
    So many dead bodies on the floor |
    The Seven days war cant go on anymore |

    The was coming to end, seven days long so many sent to heaven |
    There was this young one by the name of Evan, picked up an AK 47 |
    And with that sparked a new found hate for both sides towards the other |
    One after another, turned on there sons and their mother, father and brother |
    The war ended with blood shed, skies painted red as so many where now dead |
    The path was led by the father of the killed boy, to the bed of the boy we all fled |
    The mother placed her hands on her heart, begged the lord please |
    She dropped to her knees, the rest went out to appease |
    But they wouldn't hear or see of it as the turned and walked off |
    With that the 7 Days War was done for now with a single cough |

    The Seven days war cant go on anymore |
    We gotta shove the past out the door |
    So many dead bodies on the floor |
    The Seven days war cant go on anymore |

    Thats it, hit me up.

  2. #2
    Reno Starr
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    Uppin'

  3. #3
    Bigg E Z
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    dope shit blud.....the hook was mad...i got into the hook eazy...and off it quick to the other verses....ill shit dawg....

    yo chek my shit out....SIN for FORGIVNES...pzzz

  4. #4
    Reno Starr
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    Aight thanks, i will peep ya drop

    Still Uppin

  5. #5
    MeX
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    like Big E Z that was ill.

  6. #6
    Reno Starr
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    Thanks for the few replies so far

    Still Uppin this, so dont sleep.

  7. #7
    Reno Starr
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    Uppin again, so many people have looked at it but left nothing...wonder why.

  8. #8
    Horus Sky
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    nice...nice Story telling, descriptive...

    fluid scheme....pretty solid dunn

  9. #9
    Reno Starr
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    Thanks

    Still Uppin

  10. #10
    Reno Starr
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    Uppin cause yall sleeping

  11. #11
    BANNED for biting
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    Ill dawg....I Liked every Line

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    Kali4nia Love Meta 5's Avatar
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    that was a dope track......

    like to hear it in audio over a Nas type of beat.......

    flowed well and content was dope
    Original 1-2 Punch Tourney Champ

  13. #13
    Saladin
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    this was cool..

    liked the conecpt...

    but try to make it flow a lil smoother,...

  14. #14
    Reno Starr
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    Yea about the audio thing, im thinking about something like that but I gotta work on my voice a bit because it sounds funky over the mic. The flow yea is kinda good here and there now that I read it over i will have to touch that up some for the audio if i make one for it.

  15. #15
    Reno Starr
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    Uppin this piece for a few more times is all.

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