bump...
bump...
a rookie peice would be nice
DOPE
thats all i can say Philly. this shit was Ubber Dope lol.
the notebook part was fuckin awesome hella creative
good shit man Hall Of Fame potential man
rtf and leave feedback on the linkin my sig please
^^banned... lol
feedback?
i lol @ myself often
yeah this was ight man,
you kept it simple but affective you
didnt go for big vocab or indepth lines
but your stanzas worked well and the
piece on a whole flowed real nice but
like w1 said the last 2 lines seemed a lil
outa place nothern the less this was a decent
piece man and a good read.
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