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Thread: Not Many Def Left!

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    Not Many Def Left!

    on mics - get it sewn like a hole in ya sweater
    paid cause he game wit a pen like bowling for cheddar
    only the clever wit - make you X stars like the confederate
    keep the ettiquite damn fine for man kind's betterment
    heaven sent like psalms he palms the mic like a stress ball
    come to bless all who throw up they hands and yes yes ya'lls
    weak MCs make the flesh crawl and give a nauseous feeling
    take caution when dealing with bosses when he flosses off the ceiling
    or should i say dome piece - the microphone poems don't cease
    twist an MC arm til he say uncle like his own neice
    use elbow grease on the mic - none can compare the work
    drop so many bombs on stage he raise the terror alert
    rock the tool dangerous and highly flammable like rocket fuel
    to real MCs thas fed up - keep ya head up like pocket pool
    bring the thread back from the dead like a defribulator
    demonstrate a different way to diminish all the imitators
    ledge - some say he purdie like a drum track innovator
    ask him to spit a hit then come back ten minutes later
    cause when the pen and paper mate word is born in a manger
    why i'm uncomfortable around the wack like watching porn w/ strangers
    he bring a swarm of bangers - just be informed of the danger
    of how he spit out mad words like he swore in anger
    peep the cold hearted flow of a truly ruthless soul
    that keep rich bitches staying downtown like a super bowl
    truth be told - he don't fake a front like his tooth is gold
    bet the bank soon as he pull ya card ya whole group'll fold
    some wack cats pass they ass raps over fax digits
    the type L be gettin pretty lit up like jax bridges
    render a shady flow still it tends to be fadin yo
    and cats miss it when it's gone like skills center radio
    still checkin for the 8th mixtape to while on
    to see Ledge bomb the mic like krylon to pylons

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    Wooty, nice vent ledge.. Rhyme and flow were tight as usual, and you just kept throwing meta's at me whether I liked it or not. I thought a lot more effort went into the beginning of your verse, but it didn't ever weaken throughout. Your multi's just kept a constant flow warm, and your tore apart line after line.. very nice.

    "only the clever wit - make you X stars like the confederate
    keep the ettiquite damn fine for man kind's betterment
    heaven sent like psalms he palms the mic like a stress ball
    come to bless all who throw up they hands and yes yes ya'lls "

    Loved that part..
    Bigging yourself up is hard to do, but you nailed it here mate.
    Props.
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=306407
    ^Hit that up

    Anyway, well ledge you aint lost a thing. Your flow is still insanely dope and really is waht takes your pieces to the next level. Don't get me wrong your conent is definantly there but I don't think I've seen anyone on this site flow quite like you. Your wording is superb, there are no awkward places or wrong syallable counts to fuck up the flow in any type of way. The multis were great, really kept the read interesting and kept your usual style intact. Honesty dope piece here.

    only the clever wit - make you X stars like the confederate
    keep the ettiquite damn fine for man kind's betterment
    cause when the pen and paper mate word is born in a manger
    why i'm uncomfortable around the wack like watching porn w/ strangers
    Dope man, keep em coming. Know I know you do poetrys o leave feedon the link I left please.

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    thanx czeching....now I'm off to the nerdaway.

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    I enjoyed this a lot more than that nerdy ish I read from you a bit earlier.. don't do that again, it hurt my head..



    Seriously though.. while that drop wasn't really my kinda thing, I respect you experimenting with different styles. It's refreshing to see. I think very few could've pulled off this sort of topic and had it come off as well as you have managed. It's the sort of thing that all the e-gankstuh's do and fail horribly at.

    only the clever wit - make you X stars like the confederate
    keep the ettiquite damn fine for man kind's betterment
    heaven sent like psalms he palms the mic like a stress ball
    come to bless all who throw up they hands and yes yes ya'lls

    ^ Your rhyme scheme and use of multi's & internals in these lines and others were dope. The wordplay with "palms" & "psalms" and the "X stars" metaphore were really creative.

    While this isn't nearly my favourite drop from you, it was an enjoyable read. I would appreaciate your thoughts on Ms. Contralto brudda!!

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    Re: Not Many Def Left!

    and im not a legendary member????.....man i do this on the regular!!!

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    Re: Not Many Def Left!

    Closed. Next time leave 2 links, RECENT links.

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