Fuck Forever: I Rather Die For A Moment of Clarity

[Bounce]

Intro:
It's that time again, so I craft some lines that redefine
what you read in rhyme & realign your minds with dope
pressed in keys to impress & please, & script w/ ease
antiquities to inflict degrees of streaming thoughts, bloke
my plots provoke, not a Brit, although I'm international
& never ration flow, rational, yet known to let passion go
& fashion a chain reaction w/ the mere words that I sew
& fine stitch a rhythm deep into the flesh that I'm owed
broke fresh from the mold, my inks bound to explode!
So sit back, watch my fireworks rain w/a favorite strain
as I go up in smoke to catch a fire..
.................................& stomp a verse out on ya brain!


Fuck Forever: I Rather Die for a Moment of Clarity


I'm a product of super sized portions & failed abortions
enslaved by the buck, in a stupor I've mailed distortions
to cause mass contortions in flesh, like a terrorist fuck
I'm bound to blow & tear a hoe with a fist fuck on liquor
turn a nation to dust w/ an arsenal, to sit back & snicker
as flames flicker & rain radio-active ash, while I actively
plan, my strategy's grand.. "hold the world hostage..
.................................................. ..............as long as I can"
just another drunk uncle, who goes by the name of Sam
cloaked in a star spangled banner and mad as a hatter
leaving opposing nations starved, strangled & battered
ravenous from birth, I chewed thru the hand that bred me
& pursued war upon all lands, for the crude that fed me
spilled blood & flash fried armies just to kick up some dirt
reign supreme as a superpower & shower all w/ new hurts
I rule with an Iron Fist, & rewrite history, to make it all mine

A menace to all societies sworn to destroy any and all
enemy opposition in any position, I point & many will fall
either with me or against me, it's senseless to test me
don't you remember the A-bombs I dropped on Japan?
arrogant as fuck that's American for fuck you & your clan
all power corrupts, but absolute power corrupts absolutely
& my captain's drunk at the helm shouting orders astutely
putting boots on the sands of Iraq, Afghanistan and Iran
Syria, Yemen, Oman.. are next in line for a hail of bombs
we sail along on our ships of war & devastate your shore
to settle a score 4ever etched in the malice on our hearts
& blow apart a people sand locked upon ancient parts
of a world ruled by a Great Western Beast, scores deceased
by a wrath unleashed in the name of "the war on terror"
So "Fuck Forever", destructive times corrupt the mind
I'm American as apple pie engaged w/ an enemy that ain't
afraid to die...

So I strap on my boots to get..
..my scrap on,
while you strap on explosives to get..
.. your blast on!
maybe in time our pain will fade away..
..a fatal straightaway,
on a crash course ode to destruction..
..where death,
has the right of way, night or day..
..it's a game we play,
w/ fortune cookie instructions & stalemates..
..like jail bait, I'm young,
for the pushin & strapped w/ the kush'n hand..
..wrapped like the Taliban,
to be blunt, I'm twisted man, also fucked..
..if I oppose the laws,
that stand firm on this here land..
..I'm damned if I do,
but I'll be damned if I don't, so fuck a forever..
..& strap a bomb,
under my coat, in the name of Allah..
..its murder she wrote!
as another tower falls in a blaze of revolt..


What good is FOREVER when our people bleed for your crops
get beat by your cops & forced into war over greed at the top?


Fuck Forever, I rather die for a moment of clarity..
.................................................. ..............Signed: A Revolutionary

By: Bounce

[Tragedian.]

w00t this was fuckin dope my man...holy fuck one of the best ive read...damn...flow was nearly perfect....multies were off the hook my man...this drop was filled with them...wordplay was near pefection same wit the vocab...a very nice selection of words in this for sure.....topic was fuckin dope...ppl try to write on this but it never works...unlike you...this deff stood out as the best all month...nice shit man...would u mind leavin me some feed if u have the time...stay up man peace,.

[Bounce]

thanks for the props my man. This is my SS battle quaterfinals verse against elementoe soul. I felt good when it flowed off my finger tips. I had fun with it. I'll get to your Om as soon as I can...

thanks.

[P. Mortuus]

The flow was nice and so where the 2 different structures. Overall, i didn't much feel the first verse but the 2nd one blew me away like whoa. I liked the imagery as it was very very detailed and yet the flow was retained. Not someting everyone can do and something which puts your works on another level. The point taken towards the topic was good to also, i see how you coloured the netherland/holland flag as well....na really i mean the american flag it tied in well with the whole topic. Overall, i enjoyed reading this and it was a very fine read indeed, stay up.

[Richard Parker]

This was a great piece, Bounce.. As you know, your usual style isn't my favorite... however, this had the flow I look for, and a good storyline as well. The intro didn't seem to have much connection to the topic, other than the fact that is was "building up" into the actual piece... But regardless, it was refreshing. respect

[Bounce]

Thanks feebs, glad you could peep this, although I'd really like to have to peep something other than a rushed SS verse.

peep original props: a revolution in hip hop ( I think you will like that more than this)

[Nique.]

Your piece are constantly above average and it bothers me. Be human for once!! Have a decent/good piece. Geez. Ha. Anyway, this wasn't one of my favorites from you (the hip hop one was though), but it was very refreshing. You have a very sporadic, abstract kind of style that annoys me (the flow), but I manage to overlook that when I read your pieces. The first stanza was mad random. Just like you were rhyming, and that's cool, but my favorite stanza was the one in white. Had more in depth emotion and overall message to it. Your concept was being redefined and clarified a lot more at this part. What made this piece interesting was not the content itself, but your ability to incorporate all the different styles into one refreshing read. First stanza you're just rhyming it seems, second stanza it's like you're spitting. .on a mic off the top. .just mad feelings overflowing in conjuction with the words to make it rebellious type melody, third stanza it was like you were saying 'alright, now seriously. .lets get to the point' and you caught my attention, and last stanza. . you've calmed down. .your rebellious attitude is non chalant at the moment. .and you're coming to an end. .for now. Haha. Yea, I over analyze, but this was a good read.

[Bounce]

Thank you, it's nice having your thoughts in my threads, I really appreciate it. yeah, I think you are picking up on my audio geared flow as opposed to the standard Text type. Since I have little time to write for RB, I decided last WoP, that anything I write will be geared towards audio. 2m birds with one stone type of deal. I stay writing for RB, plus it helps me keep up with my own projects off the net. Might come across differently when read in an OM, but it;s structured around my flow in audio. You'd just have to be familiar with my audio in order to make the connection. Best I can do under the circumstances, since I'm one hell of a busy person. If you read it as it where slam type poetry, it comes off the top better.

[B.I.Detained.]

I liked this from the start, mate. I think it was the attitude at the beginning of the read that got me hooked to it. I've noticed how you've edited your style a touch regards to your rhyming.. and it works a treat. For the content itself, you once again gave it a shit load of originality, not original as the direction you went, but the whole way you told it. Jumping from 1st to 3rd person in places was just dope to me.. I like a well told piece with roles being played. Like Nique said before me, you're still not letting your bar lower, which for all of us, its a mint situation.. as we're all raising our game to keep up. Always a pleasure..
Hit my latest when you get chance mate.

[Bounce]

Thanks for the kind words, it's you guys keeping me on my toes. I swear I can't drop my gaurd even a little bit around here.

[Bounce]

up.

[Bounce]

knock the crust off...

[The Vortex]

yeah ithought this was sic still for real. i like when you dig deep for the sickness to flow. those kind of emotional outbursts are inspirational to the likes of me. i actualy liked this more than the revolution joint. which i also liked things about but aint gert to holla yeu at that. but yeah started off w/ a somewhat seperate verse topic wise. but still that intro showed potential as a text or r mic rap battler stiil i reckon. like some random punches was thrown n ish.. but yeah when you go into the red and then white verses. there where many tensely sic moments. and i could verbaly flow in my head w/ it. like as if you sent me a song to recite. i would of changed a few things here and there tho,. like the word "Bloke", being there couldnt work for me. 1 or 2 other lines like that. but ish was str8. for REAL.......

nothing knocked me out much in the BLUE
apart from maybe say the last TWO

hot ish still.

when u hav time check tgis if poss.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=307199