Aight, here we go again! The rulez:
10-25 lines (10 min./25 max.)
NO hatin votes
No dick ridin votes
Crew votes allowed
First to 5 poll votes winz
Remember: YOU spit first
LET'S GET IT ON!
Good luck dawg!
Persianplaya408
MC 808
Aight, here we go again! The rulez:
10-25 lines (10 min./25 max.)
NO hatin votes
No dick ridin votes
Crew votes allowed
First to 5 poll votes winz
Remember: YOU spit first
LET'S GET IT ON!
Good luck dawg!
ay this nigga barely beat me last time, he cant rhyme, if u give time, all he'll do is cop mine, n pretend its a dime/
his shit is wack, its played out like ja rule, he couldnt flow even if he was water in a pool/
dis cat comes wit deez weak ass punches, ill eat em up spit em out like pre-school lunches/
his ass is samoan, what kinda of nationality is dat, i'd rather be any thing else den dis wack nigga from a island thinkin hes black/
his rhymes lack, just like his lyrics, i could understand more if i was readin a book written in hyroglyphics/
his should dont make sense, its just gibberish, my rhymes is sweet, like black licorice/
ima give this cat a losin record, like da cleveland cavs, he doesnt spit raps, his shit is written, straight out da labs/
mc 808, this guy comin this battle thinkin its as easy as cake, ima clean this cat up, like takin care of leaves with a rake, this aint even a high stake/
mc 808 gonna be shakin when i bust him with this gangsta verse, i could have ripped him without usin a curse/
cuz his whole image is wack, its like a plastic plaque, if we were b-ball n he had an open lane, he still couldnt go to da rack/
like i said hes a choker, he couldnt be cool if he was a smoker, n wouldnt have good vocabulary if he was wall street broker/
ima end this verse with a blast to reality, mc 808 wont win this battle because he lacks technicality/
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=52538
vote there playa an ill give ya a fair vote here when its done...m 808 can vote there too..........
i voted on dat battle, remember to drop ur vote here after mc 808 spits... one'
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Aight dawg Checkin in. But befo I drop, I jus wanted to tell u that I never pre-write my shit. And it wasn't a bad drop u did. HEre we go:
AIght dawg..........
Now we back at it again/
But it obviously shows who improved since then/
Me of cours, not you Mr.2-11/
Yo verse, I can jus throw it in the toilet and piss/
U need some toilet paper fo that mouth cuz all you spittin is shit/
Me wit a losin record? Dawg think again/
U compare my record wit urs, and u tell me who's so far winnin/
So ur irrelavent bullshit can lick my nut sack/
Cuz me givin u 2-12, is not like, but WORSE than the Cleveland Cavs/
Why would I wanna copy a weak-ass rhyme from Persian/(Check his opener)
He don't even know how 2 get his flow right, he raps like a virgin/
No, not touched fo the very 1st time/
But a cunt who gets man handled by 808 not once, but TWICE/
In the last battle, u told me to go 2 skool and start learnin/
Boy look at u and yo gay shit, it's worse than a Re-make version/(re-making a song)
So u tryin 2 write all big thinkin u can intimidate me/
U call that a gangsta verse, that shit aint even manly/
Nigga I'll scramble you up like the fall of Humpty Dumpty/
Commin straight thru ya like the bible story of Moses splittin in 1/2 the Red Sea/
That's right dawg, all of a sudden u all speechless/
Now ur minds empty like ur small nut sack, it's meatless/
Spotless like a leapord, u beat'n me is a never/
Be sure dat below on yo signature...../
You also add "loss to MC 808" along wit Trix and irrelaviance after they update u to a 2-12 record/
Uppin fo votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
my vote WOULD HAVE BEEN mc 808...but in the end its not...
why:
he screwed himself over trying to come back at persian with that cavs thing and some others...
he rhymed way to much about sex and played out lines that didnt deal with persian...persian did this also some, but his flow was better and he didnt do it too much...
yall can check this if ya want when its done:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=53090
Aight dawg, I can respect that. Still Uppin yall ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
yo mc808 feebles right
about your ending but
your beginning was nice
u shouldv'e either ended it
sooner or stayed on the subject
this was a close one but for
better punches
vote=MC 808
nice battle, props to you both
Peace
y'all vote for this joint son, i'm a get my vote in.. mayn. it's a whole lotta politiking just to get votes here son
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=53040
Yeah I know what yall mean by my endin part. It was kinna messed up after I read it too. Well, still uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Aight yall, come on and vote. This shit is sleepin. Hit this, and I'll return the favor 4sho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like mc's one better
Great start off
You kept me reading.
For persian
I liked your but you could of done better.
But what do I know I'm a whitekid who can't vote.
I'm Out
"Im just a Whitekid
Who thinks he can rap"
-Whitekid
Whitekid, I appreciate da vote dawg, too bad you don't have 100+ posts. Come on yall. Dis is like Deja Vu, the last time persian and I went at, it took 6 pages fo our battle to end cuz yall took a long time to vote. So, this time, can yall jus hurry up and vote pleez. I'll return the favor 4sho!
good battle
808=vote
beta punches n shit
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