In God We Trust ft Dj... & Pakaveli

**<Supreme>** · August 16th, 2006, 04:04 PM

Inst1gat0r
God put trusts in me so in God We Trust
A few months ago this dude was lost with us
And he sang this song about giving love….
He tought us that everyone is equal cus we all from God
And God loves us all equally so he treats us the same
And that’s why I trust God even if u deny his name…
Not long ago I was near the edge, putting paper n lead
Together to write a song about all of my emotions
And got this pain in my chest, it felt like my lungs were ripped open
So for the first time I prayed to God, and I asked for help
And he said it would be ok if I quit; since then I aint had a cigarette
In my life I’ve been thru so much shit, always hopin for a bigger cheque
And God has always been there supporting me, so I know that
He’s with every ill person, helping them thru the night so that
They can GET BETTER SOON and be with their families again
So everybody put ur hands together, God’ll help you thru the pain…

Pakaveli
The sombre moments play the piano in my mind
The emotions run the canoe down her stone face
I struggle to withhold the fountain, my bones grind
Then she floods the baron land with the salty taste
Of those precious tears that form a chain that binds
Me to the root and makes me hide from the light
That places the harsh clamp on a future so bright
The ethereal spectre jingles the chords of all kinds
That erupt the volcano of sentiments that explode
In the abode that was in harmony the tears corrode
I crumble and wither away and lean on the near desk
Hope that the mother of yours awakes from her rest

Dj...
When I was told bout her…i didn’t wanna believe
It jus couldn’t be true..she jus cant pick up an leave
But god knows best…and he wont let her rest..
Not jus yet..i know god is jus doin this as a test…
Shes been blessed..and I hope to god she gets better..
I know this for fact…shes jus feelin under the weather..
Shes gonna be ok we have nothing to worry about…
Shes gonna pass away…that I highly doubt…
It`ll all turn out ok…shes jus got some rust…
But we all know its fine…cos in god we trust…

**Tragedian.** · August 16th, 2006, 04:06 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=305674
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=305542

This is based on my gfs mother who could die at any time..so please know this is an actually om from the heart so try not to be to harsh with the feed.

**Witty** · August 16th, 2006, 04:35 PM

alright this was decent, I really felt the emotion in every part of this peice, that is what stood out to me more than anything. I Knew this was going to be a very emotional peice because of the name, and this kind of OM has been done loads of times, but it never gets played out for the simple fact that something close to your heart can not get old. All verses were pretty decent here, the lasst one was maybe a bit simple and I've seen a lot better from the person who wrote it, but it was still packed with loads of emotion, and it was still decent. Instigator you did quite well, but I think your lines were too stretched, lines that long make the flow very choppy which results in the peice being hard to read, but other than that it was quite a good verse. The strongest verse here was from the person I expected it to be from, Pakaveli. Pak you once again dropped dope, you had dope imagery and the emotion was felt big time, you had a nice storyline and basically your verse was very good,it provided a good read. This was quite a good peice. and I hope you GF's Mom get's better soon dj, peace.