Birth And Death

[Twixn...]

clashing ops.

[Summit Ave.]

I enjoyed this read. The vocab was decent. The art was complex and had good concepts. The wordplay was great, it' brought out alot of imagery and emotion line by line. The rhyme scheme was a good choice. It was structured perfectly. I liked the way you concluded the read. I really enjoyed it.
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Please leave feed on my om', thank you!

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[Twixn...]

ok thanks... last up.