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Thread: Lyrical Jawn.

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    nique... you are like unbelievable with multis, i even wonder how you can counjer up all that thought, i mean their wasnt a fitted story line to this as you even said its just a flow, but a really nice one i should add, the structure was just about perfect, the message was clear, and there is a great deal of insight within the om. i can tell you werent just concerned about the rhyme and rhythmn of it, but also the "put together" which i thought personally was fantastic, even your sideline oms can make the hof imo. send me a pm if your not busy... 9/10 str8 up, just wish their was a steady story line
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    Quote Originally Posted by .Nique.
    ^Ahahaah. You're English. You probably just couldn't catch the flow.

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    whats being english got to do with anything? unless youre using slang... i was wrecked first time reading it, so its like below


    Quote Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
    Lol @ Dev

    this shit flowed the whole way through
    Quote Originally Posted by Evolve
    I really dont think Dev was reading the same piece i just did. Flow was bananas!! I fealt this piece. What i got from it was .. basically, as humans.. we constantly contradict ourselves. We want to do good... but we do the oppisite. I dont know if that was the point or not.. but thats what i got out of it.. and all that matters is that I AM HAPPY... lololol. Well done.

    lmao, fair enough it did sorta flow good, i maybe worded it wrong, what i meant was there was no substance, no point to it, all she TRIED to do is show off, but basically anyone can go onto rhymezone and find multiple rhymes then throw them down in bars, its a piece of piss... it didnt even make any sorta sence, i go for substance over technicality, specially when its blah like this was... your rep has swollen your head and the kids on here all all under the influence that big words make good OM's... its all bollocks... simple as
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