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Thread: How can we STOP the Rot?...

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    How can we STOP the Rot?...

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    To find bona fide love must I lose a limb or two?
    …Swim deep rivers, or climb Kilimanjiro for you
    what can we do to cease these wars that taint the blameless
    nameless graves embrace fameless slaves of death left of gameness
    I keep taking insane risks that bring no gains… it’s inane
    Chemical rain drenches my face as this façade collapses in strain
    Pain lay-bare, nothing’s fair, all ideas return to dust & thin air
    Man can devise sense for the unwise, yet some never fucking hear
    They live in fear of awareness, unaware of the process
    Too twisted to notice life’s priceless, & loathing’s hopeless
    What wil it take to stop starving kids’ – guts aching for surplus
    Trepidation makes much of civilization feel nervous
    So how in Hell will we prevent politics from being a circus?

    Crack bottles, foil, & needles litter the ghettos seedy stairwells
    The needy crave fair health, wishing the greedy would share wealth
    As criminals enclose in square cells swear that the air smells
    How do we halt this hell? Akin to GOD we’re ask to compare selves
    Progression’s at standstill, as man kills & plans deals his hands feel
    Lacking digestion his glands fill – with rage, ravaging the tranquil
    What’s it take to erase rape, & see it’s a mistake acting as crazed apes?
    Do we gouge the eyes of inmates, feed them peanuts on tinned plates
    Even sin hates to be abused, induced feeling sick & bemused
    I writ for the truths, excel… & edit new scripts for the youths
    Proof’s in the pudding, I wouldn’t trust a soul that appears wooden
    After all these years trodden, it’s easy to be gone & forgotten
    Rotten to compost, how can we stop the Bubble hitting rock bottom

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    Last edited by The Vortex; July 18th, 2006 at 04:09 PM
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    Now this was a very good read. The emotion flowed consistantly thorough out the piece... i felt that it was worder very well and the rapid rhyme scheme made it read even smoother...The vocab was crazy.....i felt that you handled the topic very well never straying away from the topic....This was some real deep emtional shit......Overall I'd give it a 8.5/10..................NICE SHIT

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    Crack bottles, foil, & needles litter the ghettos seedy stairwells
    The needy crave fair health, wishing the greedy would share wealth
    As criminals enclose in square cells swear that the air smells
    How do we halt this hell? Akin to GOD we’re ask to compare selves
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    Vortex trademarked......all over this was the propa Vortex stlyr. With the sicamore multies and the propa vocab. The flow was excellent the tempo of this piece was fitting to. I liked the way you made the reader read the topic and not get bored or distracted. That was very impressive. Laslty, what can i say...giving advise to a person who knows his ways would be foolery...you are an excellent writer and i wish you the best for your next piece. Stay up and keep em poppin' na mean
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    yeah f'sho imma do how i do n do it sum mo f'sho

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    wake Up!. You Sleepy Fucks

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