imma post in a second
spittin quik
Tha_SaNdMaN
imma post in a second
Spittin Quick, Get Off-my-dick, im only laughin cuz my cum-stuck on ya upper-lip,
watch this shit while i flip tha script, and kill him as slow as i fucked his bitch,
after that she sucked my dick, if you kissed her you ill cuz my style is sick,
but my nut is still on ya upper lip, i thought you could spit Quick,
up against me you will always get ripped, blazin shots at ya dome like a blood to a cryp,
time to switch my style on this bitch,
STYLE SWITCH
now look at him on my dick he thinks he can spit quick but hea aint shit,
fuckin wid me, Like a roach is how he got lit,
dont try to run stay in ya seat, SIT
only spittin second so it wont look like ya rhyme is pre-writ
imm tearin his ass like it was a porno flick,
imm leavin you wit these words, GET OFF MY DICK
Ok since i said i wasnt battlin, ima just destroy you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!(thats my check in)
and i guess unlimited linez then
prepare to get merked kid
Another victim, shit when yall gonna ever learn..........
Aight look.
.::KILLA::..
SANDMANS rhyme's are 'air born', dawg, they ~hold-no-weight~//,
kids more a 'dentist' than a rhymer,spittin so much filler he could~mold-a-state~//.....
currdlin ya demise kid, ~Quik-holds-ya-fate~, rhymes so 'cashed out', ya read dem and receive~Gold-rebates~//
kid couldnt be 'top-gun' tossin ~machs-from-jets,//
shittin on this kid like i'm~exlacksing-vets~//
*QuiksCurse* *dispurse's* pain ta throats like i'm ~attackin-necks~,this kid got an oscar fa fuckin~'acting-net~//lol...2
Dudes ~Lackin-(A)ssault~, Quiks 'buildin' up his jokes, got ~Sandman-packed-in-assphault~//.....
like beheadin a chestah, this 'king' brings *death-to-this-comic*//, if he thinks he's hot he's more confused than buhdist asians *reppin-islamic*//
couldnt walk ova my sickness, if he ~stepped-in-my-vomit//.takin up fists wid Quik is like heroshima~exceptin-a-bomb kid~//
kid thinks he gangsta but take away the curses in his raps, n whats~left-is-a-sonet//
kid acts more bitch than~wyklef-in-a-bonet~//...5
..::MULTIS::..
Sandmans rhymes like a mathmatician ~stackin-feeces//
muliplyin shit still equals shit, so shit is this kats ~rappin-theesis//
shoulda named this kid pebbles, cuz this bitch is as ~dum-as-a-rock~, thought RB was a porn sight where he could~thumb-his-cock-ta-some-Pac//
tried releasin lighters, still failed in ~droppin-some-hot~//
kid couldnt come correct if ~spell-checked-his-semen//
like paramedic gats my ~shells-left-ta-check-his-breathin//
like a todla pretendin he *eatin-a-stake*, i ate this kid and at ~best-Quik-was-teachin~ when *beatin-this-fake*//
now you wonder why i dot like battlin vets. i got tore but all its doin is elevatin me. one day ill come n battle you again when i feel up to tha challenge.
yo this was a one sided battle, spittin quick jus killed that otha nigga, haha, all sandman rapped a/b was quick givin him head that shit was dumb its ok to use one line a/b that maybe not ur whole verse that shit gets played out quit, jus a word of advie, vote: spittin quick
youll be aight
kid u doin good, just keep goin, youll get up there in no time
but keep battlin vets thats the only u would elevate wit experience
one
check out my other one and vote
i dont think i have to explain much on this...
Some advice to sand, i think ya gotta drop da DICK BITCH thing,
and hit up on some wordplay...I'm not sayin i'm good at all by that.
I just think it will sound better, cause bitch dick get played alot..
If you come original youll get voted....I think you have skill...But the wordplay work on it..
Dam kid youll be uppin, i'll be watching for ya...
Other then that, i dont why you picked spittin, i dont think i could ever be up to his level...
Wordplay was greatly thought about...Punched hard and yeah i cant say much,
cause it was fucken really ill as...
Vote spittin..cause of everything..lol..nah good to se sand you got balls...Like that...
Yo peep my shit against Zainy...
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shit i juss come to this site to elevate my realhome is urbanflows.com im coleader of a crew there, but every so oftern gotta raise tha bar for them, so i come here and every1 tells me what im doin wrong. its bee wokin so far and it aint gettin in tha way of my crew.
Reppin urbanflows.com Hostile Godz
thats good for you kid. Not in sacarstic way, but thats good kid, good shit keep it up, U elevatin though, u gonna be nice as a bitch, so keep goin
yeah spittin quik took this easily. his wordplay and complexity was a lot betta. Sandman i know ur knew but u just need to come up with original disses and mayb work on wordplay.
But at least u have guts to battle vets. Thats good keep it up.
VOTE => Spittin Quik <=
vote=spittin quick
better wordplay
:\ hes a vet wut do you expect....
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sandman was wack, that style switch did little to save you. spittin came out ill, and his flow was quik as his name suggests
VOTE ---> spittin
someone poll me up at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=49645
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