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Last edited by D. Josey; August 8th, 2006 at 10:22 AM
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Nice Read.
I liked this piece, it was beond my imaginations. I now think you have what it takes to be in The Truth. I liked how you did the abab rhymescheme with metaphores. Great read, I mean, I dont see how this related to the title in anyway, but the vocabulary, words, flow, line length, rhymescheme, everything was on point. I hope you keep writing as you did in this piece. Good job.
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this is some really deep poetry shit. i was feelin it although it was almost too deep for my shallow mind to grasp lol
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I liked it. Pretty poetic. If I may, I'd like your permission to experiment with this as a song for my band........ I liked the writing style 1,2,1,2. And I thought it was a pretty enjoyable read throughout. Nice work Exact.
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great peice this looked like you put a lo of time into it thats good the topic i can't realy put in words cause it was confusing to me which probobly means it's so deep and complex i cant understand it so great job there the flow went along with the story and always stayed mellow and just simply went along the vocab was excellent saw some in almost every line the wordplay was really good in the second paragraph you could have improved it a little but it was undoubtobly good so great job with this stay up
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Geez, how'd it get way down here?
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