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    Enchained -N- Societies Wayz

    Life's distance-Hyroglyphics-children listen
    take heed-to life's disease-casuse father's lost in the system
    this is my ghetto love song-ghetto prisim's
    ghetto living-equal more prisions-engraved in underdeveloped decisions
    -divide and conquer-from blowing this marshall
    getting Slim and Shady-from he who creates this monster
    what was Conta witout guns-no Fun-like life witout funds
    though you can't get some witout one
    to advance-man you gotta take that chance
    and when you step out on that limb boy throw up ya hands
    ain't gotta listen, sing and dance-to give props to the man
    just Man ya ground and watch where ya stand
    Haters all around-see the eye's of the Devil and tey plotting a Plan
    Killin they Kin over sips of Gin and Hen
    and then
    it's Remy to reminise-the live's of those lost during this
    .Shhhhh!
    "Dissin me is the quickest way to a shot @ the best."

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    "Dissin me is the quickest way to a shot @ the best."

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    Uppin for feed ppl
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    It was a tight piece, my nig...even though through some of it I got a bit lost...I see the message, but maybe some more direct wordplay would bring out the center-piece of the flow...I see the multi's which u did good on, and I like the structure...wasn't all sloppy n $hit...but I like the deep thought put into so I give it an A-...
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    appreciate the Positive feed Fam -----GOOD LOOK !
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    upn 4 feed !
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    this was a nice drop..it was short tho

    nice creativity
    mettas and
    multies

    alright vocab
    some places needed work but most of it was tight..good drop
    overall-8.7/10
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