Good overall message. I like the structure, including the wordplay. It has emotion behind it and the entire piece flowed well.
Good overall message. I like the structure, including the wordplay. It has emotion behind it and the entire piece flowed well.
yep nice work
I liked the way you talked about the danger and used a couple multies you could of flipped a couple lines to make it more interesting and use metafours to elevate the dopeness in the OM
Nice work
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Preciate ya comments, but this whole piece is a large metaphor na meanOriginally Posted by Optical.Illusion
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